God's Choice
Gratitude for God's choice of man over animals36 total reviews
Comment from karenina
We could certainly do a better job caring for "All Creatures Great and Small."-- For that matter I think it'd make God smile if w made an effort to take care of one another with a purity of heart and a joyous intent. The image chose and the meter of your poem seem almost childlike--and since we are all God's children, perhaps that is where the genius lies in this message!--Karenina
reply by the author on 07-Sep-2019
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We could certainly do a better job caring for "All Creatures Great and Small."-- For that matter I think it'd make God smile if w made an effort to take care of one another with a purity of heart and a joyous intent. The image chose and the meter of your poem seem almost childlike--and since we are all God's children, perhaps that is where the genius lies in this message!--Karenina
Comment Written 06-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 07-Sep-2019
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Thank you so much. Knowing how God and Jesus feel about the children, your kind words mean all the more to me.
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Thanks for giving voice to the faithful!--Karenina
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Thank you for raising your own voice in support.
Comment from WryWriter
This awesome poem would be a great inclusion in a children's book of poems. I love the artwork you chose for its theme. I agree with your author notes that we could do a better job of caring for God's creatures.
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2019
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This awesome poem would be a great inclusion in a children's book of poems. I love the artwork you chose for its theme. I agree with your author notes that we could do a better job of caring for God's creatures.
Comment Written 06-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2019
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I am seriously considering doing a children's book in the near future. Hmm..
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Oh, fantastic!! You must include this poem!! : )
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I certainly will.
Comment from lyenochka
A very nicely done rhyming poem that describes a feeling of contentedness in the wisdom and love of God Who chose humankind to be the caretaker of His great Creation. I agree that the Fall has made us poor caretakers of Creation.
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2019
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A very nicely done rhyming poem that describes a feeling of contentedness in the wisdom and love of God Who chose humankind to be the caretaker of His great Creation. I agree that the Fall has made us poor caretakers of Creation.
Comment Written 05-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2019
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Thank you for a wonderful review.
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
What an inspirational poem. I love the image; sure is for children. And the lyrics of your poem shows to many why we are human. God created us as a human being; not an animal.
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reply by the author on 06-Sep-2019
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What an inspirational poem. I love the image; sure is for children. And the lyrics of your poem shows to many why we are human. God created us as a human being; not an animal.
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Comment Written 05-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2019
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Thank you for your great comments.
Comment from kahpot
Yes one would think with the gift we were given we would be able to make better choices for ourselves and those in our care, this is an excellent read, I love the artwork, very well presented short work****kahpot
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2019
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Yes one would think with the gift we were given we would be able to make better choices for ourselves and those in our care, this is an excellent read, I love the artwork, very well presented short work****kahpot
Comment Written 05-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2019
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Thank you, I appreciate your comments.
Comment from Willie P. Smith
This is an excellent, heart warming, poem. It's easy to see how it has received the awards it has. The poem is rich with love for our Lord and
the blessings he has bestowed upon an unworthy species. I am out of six stars, unfortunately.
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2019
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This is an excellent, heart warming, poem. It's easy to see how it has received the awards it has. The poem is rich with love for our Lord and
the blessings he has bestowed upon an unworthy species. I am out of six stars, unfortunately.
Comment Written 05-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2019
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No worries, I appreciate your warm and kind comments.
Comment from Pantygynt
A simple little piece that is delightfully understated. To be placed above implies a certain responsibility for those below. I think that is the nub of this brief eight liner.
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2019
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A simple little piece that is delightfully understated. To be placed above implies a certain responsibility for those below. I think that is the nub of this brief eight liner.
Comment Written 05-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2019
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You hit the nail decidedly on its head, thank you for your comments.
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Oh good.
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To have one's work complimented by a writer whose skills are as noteworthy as yours, is an honor. Thank you.
Comment from rspoet
Hello Nomi,
You've written an excellent, refreshing rhymed poem;
a nice change of pace from some of the darker verse.
We were given to wonderful gift of a brain,
if only more people used it for the betterment of all.
Excellent choice of art work to match
Nicely done
Robert
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2019
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Hello Nomi,
You've written an excellent, refreshing rhymed poem;
a nice change of pace from some of the darker verse.
We were given to wonderful gift of a brain,
if only more people used it for the betterment of all.
Excellent choice of art work to match
Nicely done
Robert
Comment Written 05-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2019
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Thank you sir. I always appreciate your wise and uplifting comments.
Comment from Iza Deleanu
I do not wish, but how I wish to be above them all:) You keep the secret of your wish well guarded not even the end can reveal it, but if you look closer you know who is the Boss in this hierarchy :"The God of love placed me above
Each and every one of them" Thank you for sharing
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2019
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I do not wish, but how I wish to be above them all:) You keep the secret of your wish well guarded not even the end can reveal it, but if you look closer you know who is the Boss in this hierarchy :"The God of love placed me above
Each and every one of them" Thank you for sharing
Comment Written 05-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2019
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Shh... please don't tell on me. LOL. Thank you for a fun review.
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Funny 😄
Comment from duchessofdrumborg
"God's Choice", is an extremely well-written and delightfully descriptive piece. This talented poet's work was a pleasure to both read and review. The painting which goes with this talented poet's work is truly excellent. I look forward to seeing your next post.
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2019
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"God's Choice", is an extremely well-written and delightfully descriptive piece. This talented poet's work was a pleasure to both read and review. The painting which goes with this talented poet's work is truly excellent. I look forward to seeing your next post.
Comment Written 05-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2019
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Thank you my love. Pleasing you is always my pleasure.
Thank you kind sir. I'm delighted to know.
