Haiku : tiny buds burst forth
Haiku contest entry17 total reviews
Comment from NickieT
The beauty of the picture is a perfect harmony for this poem. I don't know if it was intentional or not but the blossoms look like cherry blossoms - giving a nice nod to the Japanese origin of Haiku.
Beautiful poem =)
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2019
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The beauty of the picture is a perfect harmony for this poem. I don't know if it was intentional or not but the blossoms look like cherry blossoms - giving a nice nod to the Japanese origin of Haiku.
Beautiful poem =)
Comment Written 04-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2019
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Hi NickieT Thanks for your lovely review for my Haiku and yes the cheery blossoms are reflective of the Japanese Haiku tradition Cheers Christine
Comment from Gail Denham
I do love those buds - the pictures that come to mind - and it is a promise, a prompt for other trees to follow. We've winter yet to face and endure. Enjoy your spring.
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2019
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I do love those buds - the pictures that come to mind - and it is a promise, a prompt for other trees to follow. We've winter yet to face and endure. Enjoy your spring.
Comment Written 04-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2019
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Hi Gail Thanks for your review on my Haiku it just all seemed to flow Spring is really a lovely season plus the warm weather is noce after a cold winter Cheers Christine
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
I enjoyed your positive vibes here as these blooms encourage other plants and flowers to reach for the sun, a fine Haiku, a great image too, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2019
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I enjoyed your positive vibes here as these blooms encourage other plants and flowers to reach for the sun, a fine Haiku, a great image too, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 03-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2019
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Hi Dolly Thought it about time I checked in and as it is Spring here in Aus I thought a Haiku may suffice thanks for reading Cherrs Chrisxx
Comment from royowen
A wonderful entry in this haiku poetry contest Christine, of course, there's an incredible plethora of autumn, but our season is different from there's, so well done, beautifully written and imaginatively scribed, well done, good luck, blessings, Roy
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2019
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A wonderful entry in this haiku poetry contest Christine, of course, there's an incredible plethora of autumn, but our season is different from there's, so well done, beautifully written and imaginatively scribed, well done, good luck, blessings, Roy
Comment Written 03-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2019
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Hi Roy, Thanks so much, back to work and been busy getting too old to do this work for much longer LOL Yes I know there is more than the northeren hemisphere Ha Ha Enjoying some sun Cheers Chris
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Well done
Comment from aryr
Very well done Christine and good luck in the contest. The picture was perfect for your words. It was indeed a rather inspirational Haiku, it does indeed encourage others to bloom and create new life.
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2019
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Very well done Christine and good luck in the contest. The picture was perfect for your words. It was indeed a rather inspirational Haiku, it does indeed encourage others to bloom and create new life.
Comment Written 03-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2019
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Hi Ary, Thanls very much for your lovely comments and yes Spring is always a changing season in many ways Cheers Chris
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You are most welcome Christine.
Comment from Janice Canerdy
You have made excellent use of all of your syllables in this lovely haiku.
Yes, those early buds are like leaders, coaxing the other seasonal changes to come on out!
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2019
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You have made excellent use of all of your syllables in this lovely haiku.
Yes, those early buds are like leaders, coaxing the other seasonal changes to come on out!
Comment Written 03-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2019
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Hi Janice, Thanks so much and love to see the new buds burst forth it means sun LOL Cheers Chris
Comment from duchessofdrumborg
"Haiku: tiny buds burst forth", is short, succinct and very much to the point. This talented poet's work was a pleasure to both read and review. I look forward to seeing your next post.
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2019
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"Haiku: tiny buds burst forth", is short, succinct and very much to the point. This talented poet's work was a pleasure to both read and review. I look forward to seeing your next post.
Comment Written 02-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2019
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Hi Duchess, Many thanks for reviewing my Haiku and I love Spring and the new growth in many ways then Summer Yaaaa Cheers Christine
Chrissy,my possum,
You're very welcome,
God bless,
the Duchess :)))
Comment from Kathleen S.
Nice and elegant poetry... It goes well with the artwork chosen. I love how you've chosen growth as one of your themes in your words. It's nice to see how things develop and change over time.
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2019
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Nice and elegant poetry... It goes well with the artwork chosen. I love how you've chosen growth as one of your themes in your words. It's nice to see how things develop and change over time.
Comment Written 02-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2019
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Hi Kathleen Thanks for your review and aues Spring is always a lovely new season of changes I appreciate your comments Cheers Christine
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written haiku about the first signs of Spring is exciting when the seasons change we know the winter is over for a while although sometimes the summer heat make me sometimes longing for winter.
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2019
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A very well-written haiku about the first signs of Spring is exciting when the seasons change we know the winter is over for a while although sometimes the summer heat make me sometimes longing for winter.
Comment Written 02-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2019
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Hi Sandra, I hope you are enjoying Spring over your way had enough of Winter chills and look forward to Summer soon .I thought a Haiku appropriate for a retutn after a few quiet weeks Cheers Chris
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Lovely image, Chris.
-Nice to see you on FS.
-Enjoy the spring season.
-It is fall here, but sometimes
feels like summer.
-You have written a good
haiku that meets all the requirements.
-You have effective nature
and seasonal imagery, along
with a very good satori line.
-Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2019
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-Lovely image, Chris.
-Nice to see you on FS.
-Enjoy the spring season.
-It is fall here, but sometimes
feels like summer.
-You have written a good
haiku that meets all the requirements.
-You have effective nature
and seasonal imagery, along
with a very good satori line.
-Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 02-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2019
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Hi Pam, Thank for reading my Haiku and yes have been a bit quiet or actually really busy working full time for the padt few weeks so too tired for FS Spring here so that means warmer weather Yaaaaa LOL Cheers Chris
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You are welcome, Chris. I can understand that work would put a crimp in things. Take care and enjoy spring!
