What Breaks My Heart
Viewing comments for Chapter 19 "Anguished Hearts"Poems and stories tellin' it like I see it.
2 total reviews
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
You did a good job with your contest entry, fm. I enjoyed reading it for what it says although it is poignant and a sad commentary on our society. Your words flow well with great imagery. Thanks for sharing and best wishes. Jan
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2019
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You did a good job with your contest entry, fm. I enjoyed reading it for what it says although it is poignant and a sad commentary on our society. Your words flow well with great imagery. Thanks for sharing and best wishes. Jan
Comment Written 03-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2019
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Thank you ever so much for the review, comments and best wishes. Truly appreciated!
Comment from Susan X Smith
Cinquain poetry is a new format to me. Without reading your notes I knew that you were referencing the recent mass shootings. A real American heartache! Thanks for sharing. Keep writing.
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2019
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Cinquain poetry is a new format to me. Without reading your notes I knew that you were referencing the recent mass shootings. A real American heartache! Thanks for sharing. Keep writing.
Comment Written 03-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2019
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Thank you ever so much for reviewing, comments and encouragement!
