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Salvation

When people reject us we get a helpful hand

17 total reviews 
Comment from Y. M. Roger
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A very strong statement of faith and a wonderful offering for the one-line poem contest.... your pic completes the lovely presentation! ;) Thanx for sharing and best of luck to you! ;)

 Comment Written 06-Sep-2019


reply by the author on 06-Sep-2019
    Thank you so much for your beautiful review.
Comment from Teri7
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This is a very good and well written One Line poem you have penned that has much truth in it. You used great words and very lovely imagery. Best wishes in the contest. love and blessings, Teri

 Comment Written 06-Sep-2019


reply by the author on 06-Sep-2019
    Thank you from my bottom of my heart, Teri.
Comment from Mystic Angel 7777
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This I a beautiful entry for the One Line Poem Contest. It is technically sound. The content is wonderfully inspiring and uplifting. Good luck in the judging and thank you very much for sharing it.

 Comment Written 06-Sep-2019


reply by the author on 06-Sep-2019
    Thank you so much your wishes and your precious review.
Comment from Susan Larson
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Oh, Iza, I wish I still had a six to give you for this profound and picturesque piece of writing. You say so much about the comfort we can find in the land of the Lamb. Wishing you well with this one!

 Comment Written 04-Sep-2019


reply by the author on 04-Sep-2019
    Thank you so much for your kind words it means so much to me
Comment from Sally Law
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Beautifully penned, Iza. I love the sweet picture of Jesus as the Good Shepherd who leaves the 99 and comes after the one that strayed. Sending you my best today and for the upcoming contest,
Sal xo

 Comment Written 04-Sep-2019


reply by the author on 04-Sep-2019
    Thank you so much for your kind review
Comment from Joan E.
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Welcome to FanStory--I hope the site is fulfilling your goals for membership.

I admired your One-Line spiritual poem. The picture you selected and your alliteration of "l's" intensified its theme. Best wishes in the contest- Joan

 Comment Written 03-Sep-2019


reply by the author on 04-Sep-2019

    Thank you so much for your kind review and the best wishes:) So far I am having so much fun reading some many contemporary masterpieces.
Comment from harmony13
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Beautiful! The author's words are soft, kind, creative and thought
provoking. I found the words of this poem to filled with a message.
The artwork was perfect and complimented the theme and words of this
poem well.

 Comment Written 03-Sep-2019


reply by the author on 03-Sep-2019
    Thank you so much for your kind words
Comment from Janice Canerdy
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Your reverent one-liner makes excellent use of all of its words to express its message. If we have Jesus, we are never truly alone. He has the power to comfort and bestow peace.

 Comment Written 03-Sep-2019


reply by the author on 03-Sep-2019
    So true 😄
Comment from Gail Denham
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Very good for one line. And yes, we are looked at askance at times for our faith in Jesus Christ. "as they persecuted me, so shall they torment you" - this is what we should remember. Your poem says all of that. very good

 Comment Written 03-Sep-2019


reply by the author on 03-Sep-2019
    Thank you so much for your kind words
Comment from Susan X Smith
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This is a simple, yet effective piece of spiritual poetry. I appreciated the alliteration. It well meets the contest guidelines. Good luck in the voting. Thanks for sharing.

 Comment Written 03-Sep-2019


reply by the author on 03-Sep-2019
    Thank you so much for your kind words