dragons to slay
a poem4 total reviews
Comment from tempeste
Ciao mystery Poet, I gave you your 6th vote.
I like your original take on the subject " unearthed"
Instead of focusing on something buried in the ground you talked about the courage of this heroine that had been " buried" /...hidden so to speak.
This heroine that fights dragons reminded me of a cartoon I watched in the 80s : Lady Oscar
She was of noble status but grew up as a boy and became a soldier before the French Revolution.
She became a heroine of the people and she dressed like the heroine in the pic you provided.
Lady Oscar had blonde long hair though but she was a pro with the sword.
I'm not sure if this cartoon showed in the USA?
Anyways, I enjoyed reading about this heroine and her courage against a foe so terrifying .
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2019
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Ciao mystery Poet, I gave you your 6th vote.
I like your original take on the subject " unearthed"
Instead of focusing on something buried in the ground you talked about the courage of this heroine that had been " buried" /...hidden so to speak.
This heroine that fights dragons reminded me of a cartoon I watched in the 80s : Lady Oscar
She was of noble status but grew up as a boy and became a soldier before the French Revolution.
She became a heroine of the people and she dressed like the heroine in the pic you provided.
Lady Oscar had blonde long hair though but she was a pro with the sword.
I'm not sure if this cartoon showed in the USA?
Anyways, I enjoyed reading about this heroine and her courage against a foe so terrifying .
Comment Written 03-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2019
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Hola, thanks for the review and support. I do not recall that cartoon but anything that bolsters young female minds to be warriors I love. It was a fun write and dedicated to a dear friend facing some dragons of her own, cheers.
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It may not have aired in the States ..it was a big hit in Italy ..if you have time google it .
" Lady Oscar cartoon " ( there is also a film ) .
I think it was a Japonese production.
I believe it was based on a true person.
Comment from Raul1
I like how you structured this poem. It is very easy to read and understand. No grammatical errors. Thanks for sharing! Good luck in the contest! Excellent work!
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2019
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I like how you structured this poem. It is very easy to read and understand. No grammatical errors. Thanks for sharing! Good luck in the contest! Excellent work!
Comment Written 03-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2019
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Thanks for the review Raul, it was fun to write, cheers.
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You're welcome.
Comment from Mystic Angel 7777
This meets the contest requirements splendidly as you incorporate the theme well into a piece of poetic art that is within the line count guidelines. I enjoyed this fantasy piece as it is well written and a clever approach to the challenge. Good luck in the voting and thank you very much for sharing it.
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2019
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This meets the contest requirements splendidly as you incorporate the theme well into a piece of poetic art that is within the line count guidelines. I enjoyed this fantasy piece as it is well written and a clever approach to the challenge. Good luck in the voting and thank you very much for sharing it.
Comment Written 02-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2019
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Thanks for the kind review. I wrote it for a friend of mine undergoing surgery, just wanted to remind her of her warrior roots. Cheers.
Comment from A Little Bird
Congratulations on this fantastic piece. The image you've chosen complements your poem nicely, but I question the choice of background color. Good luck with the competition!
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2019
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Congratulations on this fantastic piece. The image you've chosen complements your poem nicely, but I question the choice of background color. Good luck with the competition!
Comment Written 02-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2019
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Good call. I had different artwork and forgot to change color for new art. I matched it with her stylin' mustard pants. Thanks for the review and sparkly stars to light my way. Cheers.
