winter
Winter is not fun24 total reviews
Comment from kahpot
What an excellent presentation this is, I would have liked to see the words centered (that's just me) and it is good thing winter is leaving as like you winter is not fun, best wishes for your contest****kahpot
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2019
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What an excellent presentation this is, I would have liked to see the words centered (that's just me) and it is good thing winter is leaving as like you winter is not fun, best wishes for your contest****kahpot
Comment Written 04-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2019
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Thank you
Comment from Susan Larson
Having grown up in an area with eight months of winter, I certainly identify with those naughty winds and even though the snowflakes might have been lovely, we truly got tired of them! Nice poem.
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2019
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Having grown up in an area with eight months of winter, I certainly identify with those naughty winds and even though the snowflakes might have been lovely, we truly got tired of them! Nice poem.
Comment Written 02-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2019
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Thanks and I feel the same
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written three-line poem about the coming winter that no one seems to look forward to. The cold winds scaremail away the snow flakes in the meantime.
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2019
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A very well-written three-line poem about the coming winter that no one seems to look forward to. The cold winds scaremail away the snow flakes in the meantime.
Comment Written 02-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2019
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So true😄I don't look for it either
Comment from A. Willow Bends
Well, I certainly agree winter is not fun. Beautiful, as depicted in the photo, but I like your words the best, esp naughty winds blowing away.
NOT my favorite time of the year, so related well to this one.
Great job!
Wendy
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2019
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Well, I certainly agree winter is not fun. Beautiful, as depicted in the photo, but I like your words the best, esp naughty winds blowing away.
NOT my favorite time of the year, so related well to this one.
Great job!
Wendy
Comment Written 02-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2019
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Thank you so much for your kind words and I'm on the same boat😉not a winter fun either
Comment from Janice Canerdy
You have made excellent use of all of your syllables in this vividly descriptive piece about winter, which, to me, is best viewed through a window! Personifying winds and snowflakes--impressively poetic
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2019
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You have made excellent use of all of your syllables in this vividly descriptive piece about winter, which, to me, is best viewed through a window! Personifying winds and snowflakes--impressively poetic
Comment Written 02-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2019
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Thank you so much for your kind review and I'm scared of winter too, here we can go below 50 degrees Celsius
Comment from Gail Denham
This is cute way to look at snow, the winds, and winter. When snow blankets the yard, everything becomes lovely, somehow softened. However, around here, we get a lot of it - and husband is out with tractor snowplow early.
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2019
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This is cute way to look at snow, the winds, and winter. When snow blankets the yard, everything becomes lovely, somehow softened. However, around here, we get a lot of it - and husband is out with tractor snowplow early.
Comment Written 02-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2019
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We got lots too; I am in the wrong country😉I will prefer a Jamaica kind of place but i missed the rich charming prince
Comment from Thomas Bowling
It's 92 today where I live. Winter is a long way off, but your poem sent a chill my way. That's what good poetry does. It takes someplace else. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2019
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It's 92 today where I live. Winter is a long way off, but your poem sent a chill my way. That's what good poetry does. It takes someplace else. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 01-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2019
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Thank you so much, and in my case, I'm expecting snow very soon.
Comment from jenintorre
You paint a very vivid picture of winter in your three line poem. It made me feelquite chilly while reading it although the temperature is 30 degrees here. I wish you lots of luck in the competition. Jen.
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2019
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You paint a very vivid picture of winter in your three line poem. It made me feelquite chilly while reading it although the temperature is 30 degrees here. I wish you lots of luck in the competition. Jen.
Comment Written 01-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2019
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Thank you so much for your kind words
Comment from Mystic Angel 7777
This meets the contest requirements beautifully as you deliver a technically sound 3 Line Poem. The content is timely given that winter is just around the corner. The imagery is playful. Good luck in the judging and thank you very much for sharing it.
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2019
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This meets the contest requirements beautifully as you deliver a technically sound 3 Line Poem. The content is timely given that winter is just around the corner. The imagery is playful. Good luck in the judging and thank you very much for sharing it.
Comment Written 01-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2019
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Thank you so much for your kind review
Comment from Y. M. Roger
How fun that you've made the snowflakes into the 'innocents' hiding from the harsh winds -- great job of a complete personification of a snow storm! ;) :) Thanx for sharing and best of luck in the competition! ;)
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2019
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How fun that you've made the snowflakes into the 'innocents' hiding from the harsh winds -- great job of a complete personification of a snow storm! ;) :) Thanx for sharing and best of luck in the competition! ;)
Comment Written 01-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2019
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Thank you so much for your kind review
