the soda
a flash non fiction2 total reviews
Comment from the13thpoet
Happy Friday to you. Thank you for sharing your flash fiction story with us. To tell a good story in so few words is quite difficult, I think you executed well. Good job and good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 30-Aug-2019
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Happy Friday to you. Thank you for sharing your flash fiction story with us. To tell a good story in so few words is quite difficult, I think you executed well. Good job and good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 30-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 30-Aug-2019
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Cheers, thanks for the review. I often tell my guests not to feed the kids. These little angelic kids turn into banshees craving sugar.
That little boy with the soda and desperation to ditch his riches before his friends caught up, stayed with me.
Have a wonderful week end,
your friend in prose, judester
Comment from Alex Rosel
I enjoyed reading this. It's a gentle piece that holds veracity. I think it's a good entry for the contest.
I didn't pick up on any spags. Although I prefer to use the Oxford comma, you omission of it is fine by me {winks}.
Good luck with the competition {smiles}.
reply by the author on 30-Aug-2019
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I enjoyed reading this. It's a gentle piece that holds veracity. I think it's a good entry for the contest.
I didn't pick up on any spags. Although I prefer to use the Oxford comma, you omission of it is fine by me {winks}.
Good luck with the competition {smiles}.
Comment Written 30-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 30-Aug-2019
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Thanks for the review and sparkly stars to light my way. I always tell my guests not buy candy and stuff for the kids. These kids can hear a bag of candy being opened from miles away. Then they swarm with hands out. What I do is give the eldest one the bag, then watch as he peacefully doles it out fairly, like a little judge ha ha. Cheers, thanks for the support.
