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nature's course taken

Haiku poem contest entry

34 total reviews 
Comment from Ben Colder
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The Virgin Islands may get this one coming in and then perhaps Florida. Much like Francis I suppose. Good contest piece. I find nothing wrong. Best to you.

 Comment Written 29-Aug-2019

reply by the author on 29-Aug-2019
    Thank you, Ben. I feel for those in the path. We are still reeling from Hurricane Harvey here in Houston. Hope many years pass before we see another one.
    God bless
reply by Ben Colder on 29-Aug-2019
    Yes. I join in prayer with you
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2019
    Thank you
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
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this is what's happening in Puerto Rico right now. Is this an image only or is it a real picture? The stormy weather reveals heavy clouds probably contain much wind. Such an amazing picture/poem.

 Comment Written 29-Aug-2019

reply by the author on 29-Aug-2019
    Thank you for the awesome review. We dealt with Hurricane Harvey a couple of years ago. Not a pleasant experience. Lost my home to that one. Ike was many years back, not as bad on us.
    God bless
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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That menacing cloud looks really dark and threatening, and your words are clever and descriptive, I wish you luck with the contest, an atmospheric write, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 29-Aug-2019

reply by the author on 29-Aug-2019
    Thank you for this awesome review Dolly.
    God bless
Comment from Pam (respa)
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-An effective image
and presentation.
-The syllable count is good.
-You have written a good haiku
that describes the approaching storm.
-Good use of the '-c' sound to
emphasize the storm.
-A good satori line, too.
-Good luck in the contest.
-You might want to change
natures to nature's.

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 Comment Written 29-Aug-2019

reply by the author on 29-Aug-2019
    Thank you Pam, I thought I might need to change that as well, but then it slipped my mind.
    god bless.
reply by Pam (respa) on 29-Aug-2019
    You are very welcome. I was glad to help.