Remembering Dean
Viewing comments for Chapter 23 "A Peaceful Place"A book of posts honoring our friend
9 total reviews
Comment from sunnilicious
That's an eerie triolet. It came out great. Good quote worked in and repeated, but that's the form working for you. Creative. Nice lyrical flow of rhythm and rhymes. Nice work :)
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2019
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That's an eerie triolet. It came out great. Good quote worked in and repeated, but that's the form working for you. Creative. Nice lyrical flow of rhythm and rhymes. Nice work :)
Comment Written 23-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2019
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Thanks for going back and reviewing this, Alicia. I am glad you liked the triolet with the quote and repeated lines, as well as the lyrical flow and rhyme.
Comment from Joan E.
Thank you for your selection of the triolet, reference to Frost and the lovely matching visuals in your tribute to Dean. I am certain he is in a "Peaceful Place" and will not be forgotten. Warm regards- Joan, from Ashland
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2019
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Thank you for your selection of the triolet, reference to Frost and the lovely matching visuals in your tribute to Dean. I am certain he is in a "Peaceful Place" and will not be forgotten. Warm regards- Joan, from Ashland
Comment Written 31-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2019
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Thanks for the review, Joan. I am glad you liked the triolet, reference to Frost and the visuals. I think he is in a peaceful place and will not be forgotten, either. Enjoy those plays! I don't know if I am posting for Sun. or not.
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I probably won?t be able to review again until Monday. Enjoy your Sunday- Joan
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There will be a poem waiting for you on Monday. Enjoy your Sunday, too!
Comment from BeasPeas
I believe I reviewed this poem already as a post for Dean. Many of us are making a copy for our own portfolio, too. Very nice Triolet indeed. Illustrated and penned well. Marilyn
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2019
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I believe I reviewed this poem already as a post for Dean. Many of us are making a copy for our own portfolio, too. Very nice Triolet indeed. Illustrated and penned well. Marilyn
Comment Written 30-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2019
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Yes, you did, but I put this in Robyn's book. I am glad you liked the triolet and illustration.
Comment from Teri7
Pam, This is truly a lovely poem in remembrance of Dean. You used very good descriptive words and I love the GIPHY you used as well. love and blessings, Teri
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2019
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Pam, This is truly a lovely poem in remembrance of Dean. You used very good descriptive words and I love the GIPHY you used as well. love and blessings, Teri
Comment Written 30-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2019
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Thanks for the review, Teri. I am glad you liked this tribute to Dean and the giphy, too. I did that just for Dean, as he loved using them.
Comment from Ms. Snyder
A beautiful offering I can barely log into Fan Story let alone write. I will post mine when I can write again... I was already dealing with my fathers birthday and anniversary of his passing being 10 years so it's going to take me a bit to get my bearings. Thank you for showing something beautiful and elegant for a beautiful and elegant man!
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2019
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A beautiful offering I can barely log into Fan Story let alone write. I will post mine when I can write again... I was already dealing with my fathers birthday and anniversary of his passing being 10 years so it's going to take me a bit to get my bearings. Thank you for showing something beautiful and elegant for a beautiful and elegant man!
Comment Written 29-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2019
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Thank you for the exceptional rating and review, Fonda. I am glad you l liked my tribute to Dean. Hope things improve for you soon.
Comment from Ben Colder
Bravo ! This as good as they come on this site. You backed it will good sound and an inviting scene. The poem sings a song of peace. You did well. It sang to me. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2019
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Bravo ! This as good as they come on this site. You backed it will good sound and an inviting scene. The poem sings a song of peace. You did well. It sang to me. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 29-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2019
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Thank you for the exceptional rating and review, Ben. I really appreciate all of your comments and am glad you liked the sense of peace and that it "sang to you." It means a lot.
Comment from Chrissy710
Hi Pam . A six in my heart but all out this is so like one I have read before and I thought ai had reviewed this one bit ai must be mistaken Anyway your words are lovely and Dean will be walking by the brook Cheers Chris
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2019
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Hi Pam . A six in my heart but all out this is so like one I have read before and I thought ai had reviewed this one bit ai must be mistaken Anyway your words are lovely and Dean will be walking by the brook Cheers Chris
Comment Written 29-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2019
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Thanks for the review, Chris. You did. This was put in Robyn's book.
Comment from Gloria ....
This is a lovely tribute to Dean. The opening line a laudable allusion to Stopping by Woods on a Snowy Evening.
Indeed the woods are lovely, dark and deep. The GIF is of course most fitting in recognition of Dean's facility with graphics and presentations.
Superb triolet and a most enjoyable read today. :)
Gloria
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2019
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This is a lovely tribute to Dean. The opening line a laudable allusion to Stopping by Woods on a Snowy Evening.
Indeed the woods are lovely, dark and deep. The GIF is of course most fitting in recognition of Dean's facility with graphics and presentations.
Superb triolet and a most enjoyable read today. :)
Gloria
Comment Written 28-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2019
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Thanks for the review, Gloria. I am glad you liked the tribute and the triolet, as well as the allusion to Frost and the gif. It is appreciated.
Comment from Ellie White
So beautiful. While reading it, I felt the peace your trying to convey. I just wrote a poem about a safe place so it cool that I then read this. I also feel a strong presence of God in it.
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2019
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So beautiful. While reading it, I felt the peace your trying to convey. I just wrote a poem about a safe place so it cool that I then read this. I also feel a strong presence of God in it.
Comment Written 28-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2019
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Thanks for the review, Ellie. I appreciate your comments and am glad you liked the poem and the sense of peace and a safe place.
