Halloween Poem
Don't be afraid25 total reviews
Comment from Cindy Warren
If you're coming to my house this Halloween, I plan to make you very afraid. If you're scared of witches and black cats you better not come. Only the bravest deserve a treat. LOL Happy Halloween. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2019
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If you're coming to my house this Halloween, I plan to make you very afraid. If you're scared of witches and black cats you better not come. Only the bravest deserve a treat. LOL Happy Halloween. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 21-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2019
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THANKS FOR THE REVIEW AND STARS.
Comment from CrystieCookie999
Very cute poem. I think blood thirsty has no space or a hyphen. Have you ever thought of writing greeting card verses? This is a winner. Not sure how to fix it except for what was mentioned above. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2019
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Very cute poem. I think blood thirsty has no space or a hyphen. Have you ever thought of writing greeting card verses? This is a winner. Not sure how to fix it except for what was mentioned above. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 28-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2019
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Thank you for your review and assistance and for the five stars.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Wow Willie! I loved this poem and for it's a winner for the contest, I wish I had a six for you, the flow of your words is superb and you captured the essence of Halloween here, I wish you luck with the contest, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2019
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Wow Willie! I loved this poem and for it's a winner for the contest, I wish I had a six for you, the flow of your words is superb and you captured the essence of Halloween here, I wish you luck with the contest, love Dolly x
Comment Written 28-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2019
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Thank you, Dolly. If you think it is worth a six, that's good enough
for me.
Comment from karenina
Toddlers on sugar highs
whining for more...
Begging that I
carry them to the door...
A son that goes mute
won't say "trick or treat"--
"until he's in the car
smearing chocolate on seat...
This is the other side of the page...
I've got to laugh
or "mommy monster" will rage!
(smile)
Karenina
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reply by the author on 28-Aug-2019
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Toddlers on sugar highs
whining for more...
Begging that I
carry them to the door...
A son that goes mute
won't say "trick or treat"--
"until he's in the car
smearing chocolate on seat...
This is the other side of the page...
I've got to laugh
or "mommy monster" will rage!
(smile)
Karenina
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Comment Written 28-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2019
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Thank you for your very good review and stars.
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I don't know what came over me to answer with a poetic review...but it was all in fun and I'm glad you took it that way!--Karenina
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No problem, I think your little ditty is cute and it gave me a chuckle.
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OH good! Every now and then I do this and sometimes the "reviewed" thinks I'm trying to "one up" them when in fact I'm just a geek! (smile)---K
Comment from country ranch writer
Makes one want to go to bed and cover up ones head till the morrow
Kids are chomping at the it fit this holiday to get here for them.
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reply by the author on 28-Aug-2019
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Makes one want to go to bed and cover up ones head till the morrow
Kids are chomping at the it fit this holiday to get here for them.
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Comment Written 28-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2019
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Thank you very much for your review and five stars.
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