Halloween Poem
Don't be afraid25 total reviews
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written Halloween Poem. Here are many scary things in my home that goes bump in the night and little stones thrown around all year long. It seems to be Halloween all the time. Lol
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2019
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A very well-written Halloween Poem. Here are many scary things in my home that goes bump in the night and little stones thrown around all year long. It seems to be Halloween all the time. Lol
Comment Written 22-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2019
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Thank you, Sandra, for the review and stars.
Comment from Sharon Haiste
I think this is a good entry for the Halloween Poetry contest.
Well written and well rhymed. This tells of the scary side of Halloween.
Well done and good luck to you with the contest.
Sharon
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2019
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I think this is a good entry for the Halloween Poetry contest.
Well written and well rhymed. This tells of the scary side of Halloween.
Well done and good luck to you with the contest.
Sharon
Comment Written 22-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2019
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I appreciate your review and stars, thanks.
Comment from brenda bickers
Hi Willie,
this is the first Halloween poem that makes me feel like it is Halloween.
Who doesn't love a good horror. I think you have everything in the mix there to do just what you intended.
Good luck in the contest.
Brenda.x
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2019
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Hi Willie,
this is the first Halloween poem that makes me feel like it is Halloween.
Who doesn't love a good horror. I think you have everything in the mix there to do just what you intended.
Good luck in the contest.
Brenda.x
Comment Written 22-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2019
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Thanks, Brenda, for the great review and stars. I tried.
Comment from Hitcher
Your Halloween poem would be a good one to read out to ones children or many children on Halloween, just before they go trick or treating in their scariest of costumes.
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2019
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Your Halloween poem would be a good one to read out to ones children or many children on Halloween, just before they go trick or treating in their scariest of costumes.
Comment Written 22-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2019
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Your review and stars are greatly appreciated. Thanks Hitcher.
Comment from Gail Denham
Well, thanks - my old bones can't take all that screaming and running from the ghouls. I think we'll stick to good costumes - such as our "circus outfits" for our church's Trunk and Treat - where kids from all over come to enjoy food and treats - and we little Bible study groups dress up. Our group is doing circus - so husband and I will be "poorper scoopers " with shovel, bucket and big broom. fun.
Good poem tho.
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2019
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Well, thanks - my old bones can't take all that screaming and running from the ghouls. I think we'll stick to good costumes - such as our "circus outfits" for our church's Trunk and Treat - where kids from all over come to enjoy food and treats - and we little Bible study groups dress up. Our group is doing circus - so husband and I will be "poorper scoopers " with shovel, bucket and big broom. fun.
Good poem tho.
Comment Written 22-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2019
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Sounds like fun scooping up poop, ughhh! Thanks for your review and stars, Gail.
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I intend to "ham it up" - tell people "watch it buddy, you almoswt stepped in the elephants flop - Husband! come over here with your shovel." - whatcha think? reckon I'll get kicked out of the circus.?
Comment from Brenda Elizabeth Rose
Your scary image was perfect for this piece. The rhyme and rhythm worked great. You were very creative with your poem, I loved that. Thank you for sharing. Good luck in the contest. ~Brenda
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2019
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Your scary image was perfect for this piece. The rhyme and rhythm worked great. You were very creative with your poem, I loved that. Thank you for sharing. Good luck in the contest. ~Brenda
Comment Written 21-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2019
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Thank you, Brenda, for the review and stars.
Comment from judester
This is a fun poem for Halloween. All the regulars seem to be accounted for ha ha
The only suggestion is to remove some of the ands. Bravo, judester
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2019
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This is a fun poem for Halloween. All the regulars seem to be accounted for ha ha
The only suggestion is to remove some of the ands. Bravo, judester
Comment Written 21-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2019
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Thanks for the suggestion, done. Also, thanks for the stars.
Comment from zanya
Yes indeed lots of Halloween 'fare' here to chew on - of the classic traditional variety - all in the best spirit of the season and a great pic to illustrate
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2019
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Yes indeed lots of Halloween 'fare' here to chew on - of the classic traditional variety - all in the best spirit of the season and a great pic to illustrate
Comment Written 21-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2019
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THANKS, zanya, for the review and stars.
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Very nice artwork
and presentation, Willie.
-I like your poem with
good Halloween imagery and rhyme,
as well as meter.
-The first line is also effective
with alliteration of "Witches and warlocks."
-Great use of specific examples
and a very good conclusion, too.
-Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2019
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-Very nice artwork
and presentation, Willie.
-I like your poem with
good Halloween imagery and rhyme,
as well as meter.
-The first line is also effective
with alliteration of "Witches and warlocks."
-Great use of specific examples
and a very good conclusion, too.
-Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 21-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2019
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Thank you, Pam, for all your very kind words an stars.
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You are very welcome and deserving, Willie.
Comment from JudyE
I'm old-fashioned and like my poetry to rhyme and have rhythm so I really enjoyed reading this. You've made good use of all the Halloween-type words and I'm sure this will do well in the contest.
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2019
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I'm old-fashioned and like my poetry to rhyme and have rhythm so I really enjoyed reading this. You've made good use of all the Halloween-type words and I'm sure this will do well in the contest.
Comment Written 21-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2019
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Thank you, Judy, for the kind words and stars.
