Comment from BeasPeas

Excellent

Very nicely constructed. I like the examples you've given. I have a friend who says, "there's a lid for every pot." It sounds like you've found yours. Best of luck in the contest. Marilyn

 Comment Written 27-Aug-2019

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reply by the author on 27-Aug-2019

Thank you so much for your lovely feedback, Marilyn :)
Best wishes as always, Debra

Comment from Sally Law

Excellent

I adore this rhyming poem. It cheers me so today. I think I'll print it out and put it on my mirror.
Sending you my best today and for the Rhyming Poetry Contest,
Sally xo

 Comment Written 27-Aug-2019

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reply by the author on 27-Aug-2019

Hi Sally :)
Thank you so much for your lovely review. I'm glad to have given you a smile and I'm honoured that you're going to put my poem on your mirror :) Thank you, best wishes always, Debra :) xx

Comment from PteGIJane

Excellent

Your poem is an interesting list of similes which pairs up two things that make a whole in each item. It is also showing contrast between concrete items representing the relationship between two objects. That is creative.

 Comment Written 27-Aug-2019

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reply by the author on 27-Aug-2019

Thank you so much for your lovely feedback :) I appreciate it! Best wishes, Debra

Comment from misscookie

Excellent

I like the artwork you choose to go wit your not only is it different, they are perfect match
You captured my attention from the first line to the last .
I thought hey were cute and funny at the same time.
Thank you for sharing.
Cookie

 Comment Written 27-Aug-2019

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reply by the author on 27-Aug-2019

Thanks, Miss Cookie, for your lovely feedback. I appreciate it. Best wishes, Debra :) x

reply by misscookie on 27-Aug-2019

Your very welcome.
take care.
Cookie

Comment from A Little Bird

Excellent

Thanks for this lovely light-hearted piece. Gave me a chuckle. The whimsical image you've chosen complemented it perfectly. Good luck with the competition!

 Comment Written 27-Aug-2019

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reply by the author on 27-Aug-2019

Hi Abby :) Thanks for your lovely feedback and good luck wishes, I appreciate both! Best wishes, Debra :)

Comment from LisaMay

Excellent

Light-hearted is good, and your poem is good. It is refreshingly simple and not mentally taxing (but still quite deep and meaningful) and a little bit silly and just plain delicious. I enjoyed it very much.

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 Comment Written 27-Aug-2019

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reply by the author on 27-Aug-2019

Hi LisaMay :) Thanks so much for your lovely feedback - 'plain delicious' is the kinda comment I love!! Thank you x

Comment from Heather Knight

Exceptional

I didn't want to use my last six so early in the week but I have to. This is hilarious.
And it rhymes and the picture is perfect.
A great way to start my day.
Thanks.

 Comment Written 27-Aug-2019

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reply by the author on 27-Aug-2019

Hey Maria :)
Thank you so much!
I'm glad you liked it... I never would've thought to write a poem from my silly comment made yesterday! Thanks for the push (and for the sixer!) ;)
Best wishes as always, Debra :) x

Comment from Cheryl I

Excellent

This is a very cute and peppy poem that rhymes perfectly and flows smoothly. I think you did a very good job on this. I just finished reading a sad poem, and this lift was highly appreciated! Cheryl

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 Comment Written 27-Aug-2019

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reply by the author on 27-Aug-2019

Aw, glad to give you a lift, Cheryl :) Thank you so much for your lovely feedback! Best wishes, Debra :)