Perfectly Paired
It's not all hearts and flowers ;)18 total reviews
Comment from PoemsOfDD
Aww, this is such a sweet little poem. Off matches needing to make perfect sense of each other. I really like this lighthearted and well rhymed poem. The picture is perfect and the list of contents are well thought out. Lovely :-) ~DD
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2019
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Aww, this is such a sweet little poem. Off matches needing to make perfect sense of each other. I really like this lighthearted and well rhymed poem. The picture is perfect and the list of contents are well thought out. Lovely :-) ~DD
Comment Written 29-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2019
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Thank you for your lovely feedback, DD. I appreciate it. Best wishes as always, Debra :)
Comment from Roxanna Andrews
This is great! Each thing needing a partner to be complete jsut as two in love. I didn't see any errors and felt it well done. I hope you do well in the contest. Rox
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2019
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This is great! Each thing needing a partner to be complete jsut as two in love. I didn't see any errors and felt it well done. I hope you do well in the contest. Rox
Comment Written 28-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2019
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Thank you so much, Rox :)
I appreciate your lovely feedback.
Best wishes, Debra :)
Comment from Wils
A simple poem that shows shows how both sides of a partnership rely on each other to survive. Loved the humorous side to it, had me enthralled until the end. Well done
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2019
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A simple poem that shows shows how both sides of a partnership rely on each other to survive. Loved the humorous side to it, had me enthralled until the end. Well done
Comment Written 27-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2019
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Thank you for your lovely feedback, Wild, I appreciate it :) Best wishes, Debra
Comment from Katherine M. (k-11)
I could be wrong, but I have a feeling that one rhyme is a bit far-fetched. Also, for me it would be easier to read if it was in verses. Good luck in the competition, I think it shoould do well.
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2019
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I could be wrong, but I have a feeling that one rhyme is a bit far-fetched. Also, for me it would be easier to read if it was in verses. Good luck in the competition, I think it shoould do well.
Comment Written 27-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2019
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Thanks for your feedback and the good luck wishes, Katherine :) I appreciate both...
Just out of interest, which rhyme did you think was far-fetched?!
Kindest regards, Debra :)
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Keys and cheese - it's very accent-sensitive compared to the others.
I spent many very happy years near Skipton, the gateway to the dales.
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Hi Katherine :)
Thank you... I always like to know what works or doesn't for the reader!
Skipton is a lovely place. Yorkshire really is a beautiful part of the world :)
Best wishes, Debra
Comment from Janice Canerdy
I really enjoyed this poem; it is delightful. You have very creatively
used a widely-varied list of metaphors to convey the theme that the speaker needs her significant other--that people need people!
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2019
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I really enjoyed this poem; it is delightful. You have very creatively
used a widely-varied list of metaphors to convey the theme that the speaker needs her significant other--that people need people!
Comment Written 27-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2019
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Thank you for your lovely feedback, Janice :) Best wishes, Debra
Comment from Lulube
this is just a perfect valentines card. send it in!! love the comparisons, really down to earth, witty, humorous and cleverly styled
mmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm
lulube
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2019
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this is just a perfect valentines card. send it in!! love the comparisons, really down to earth, witty, humorous and cleverly styled
mmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm
lulube
Comment Written 27-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2019
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LOL! Haha, I should do! I'll not give up my day job just yet though!
Best wishes to you, Debra x
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power to ya!
lulube
Comment from Amenian Aypotheeno
Well two's company and three's a crowd but I'd buggered if I know what four is! Strange how some things just fit together and you just wouldn't have them any other way, like the perfect combo you know the white whine with the fish and all that... yeah just imagine sea bream with harvey's bristol cream, just doesn't have the same ring to it right? Simple but effective write you have here and we all love our pairings and other halves all the time... don't we?!!? Looks side to side sheepishly :)
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2019
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Well two's company and three's a crowd but I'd buggered if I know what four is! Strange how some things just fit together and you just wouldn't have them any other way, like the perfect combo you know the white whine with the fish and all that... yeah just imagine sea bream with harvey's bristol cream, just doesn't have the same ring to it right? Simple but effective write you have here and we all love our pairings and other halves all the time... don't we?!!? Looks side to side sheepishly :)
Comment Written 27-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2019
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Thank you for your lovely feedback, Dale :)
In answer to your question....is 'most of the time' an acceptable answer?!
Best wishes, Debra :)
Comment from robyn corum
Debra,
Hahahahaha! I'm not sure I want to be known as anyone's rind, but I think I get it. hahaha A fun one. Thanks so much! This was a sweet little love poem. A bit different.
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2019
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Debra,
Hahahahaha! I'm not sure I want to be known as anyone's rind, but I think I get it. hahaha A fun one. Thanks so much! This was a sweet little love poem. A bit different.
Comment Written 27-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2019
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Thanks, Robyn :)
Comment from Y. M. Roger
LOL! Call Hallmark -- you've got their next great multi-page card here for them to print!! ;) :) Just a lovely little ditty, ma'am -- thanx so much for sharing that smile! :) Yvette
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2019
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LOL! Call Hallmark -- you've got their next great multi-page card here for them to print!! ;) :) Just a lovely little ditty, ma'am -- thanx so much for sharing that smile! :) Yvette
Comment Written 27-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2019
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Thank you so much, Yvette :) I appreciate your enthusiasm and great comments! Best wishes as always, Debra :) x
Comment from Teri7
Debra This is a perfectly paired and very cute rhyming poem you have penned about something more than hearts and flowers. You used great descriptive words and very cute imagery too. Best wishes in the contest. love and blessings, Teri
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2019
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Debra This is a perfectly paired and very cute rhyming poem you have penned about something more than hearts and flowers. You used great descriptive words and very cute imagery too. Best wishes in the contest. love and blessings, Teri
Comment Written 27-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2019
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Thank you so much, Teri, for your lovely feedback. Best wishes, Debra :)
