Monica
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Comment from Mystic Angel 7777
A person should always trust their instincts and methinks Sarah will regret not trusting hers at some point. This is very well written with one small typo:
"That way my chief can keep track of" - should be 'chef'.
I enjoyed reading this and loo forward to the next installment. Well done and thank you very much for sharing it.
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2019
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A person should always trust their instincts and methinks Sarah will regret not trusting hers at some point. This is very well written with one small typo:
"That way my chief can keep track of" - should be 'chef'.
I enjoyed reading this and loo forward to the next installment. Well done and thank you very much for sharing it.
Comment Written 30-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2019
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Thank you dear. =} Rox
Comment from Sally Law
My favorite chapter so far. I felt like I was right there, Rox. It flowed so nicely and most importantly, Monica didn't fool Sarah. Whew! I do hope she learned from the last psycho.
Sending you my best today as always,
Sal xo
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2019
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My favorite chapter so far. I felt like I was right there, Rox. It flowed so nicely and most importantly, Monica didn't fool Sarah. Whew! I do hope she learned from the last psycho.
Sending you my best today as always,
Sal xo
Comment Written 30-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2019
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Thank you dear. =} Rox
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
Thoughts and doubts ever continue; it is true that once a cop is always a cop, behavioural action anticipation is a cop's act; taletelling is realistic; well said, well done. Liked and enjoyed the read.
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reply by the author on 01-Sep-2019
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Thoughts and doubts ever continue; it is true that once a cop is always a cop, behavioural action anticipation is a cop's act; taletelling is realistic; well said, well done. Liked and enjoyed the read.
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Comment Written 30-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2019
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Thank you sir. Rox
