Eric's Epic Adventures
Viewing comments for Chapter 8 "Eric Meets Ellie"Another adventure for Eric
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Comment from Iza Deleanu
All is well when ends well: with a feast, dancing and release of the kidnapped girl. These phrases made me laugh:" "It means your dad was being bolshie, stroppy. And I wasn't!"
Thomas looked at them both and shook his head. "I can't believe I'm hearing this! You're acting like a couple of kids. Can we go and get Ellie now before she gets too old?" Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2019
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All is well when ends well: with a feast, dancing and release of the kidnapped girl. These phrases made me laugh:" "It means your dad was being bolshie, stroppy. And I wasn't!"
Thomas looked at them both and shook his head. "I can't believe I'm hearing this! You're acting like a couple of kids. Can we go and get Ellie now before she gets too old?" Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 26-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2019
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I'm so pleased you liked those parts, Iza. Thank you for this lovely review, I do so appreciate it. Big hugs, my friend. :)) Sandra xx
Comment from damommy
You have your models. That's so sweet. I'm glad everything worked out for finding Ellie May, but I'm wondering what the Medicine Man. He probably wants to know what Herbie is.
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reply by the author on 26-Aug-2019
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You have your models. That's so sweet. I'm glad everything worked out for finding Ellie May, but I'm wondering what the Medicine Man. He probably wants to know what Herbie is.
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Comment Written 26-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2019
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Ahh, there is more to it than that, Yvonne. How come a Medicine Man of an Arapaho tribe in the early 1800's can speak perfect English when no one else in the tribe can? We'll see when Eric finds out. :)) Thank you so much for another of your lovely reviews, my friend. :)) Sandra xxx
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Hmmmm.
Comment from pbomar1115
The rescuing of a little girl had a bit of mystery for me. Maybe because I didn't know the beginning. Nevertheless, the girl feared one of the rescuers rather than her suppose to be capturers.
Phillip
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2019
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The rescuing of a little girl had a bit of mystery for me. Maybe because I didn't know the beginning. Nevertheless, the girl feared one of the rescuers rather than her suppose to be capturers.
Phillip
Comment Written 26-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2019
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Yes, the rescuer was something strange to Ellie May, at least her captors were human1 Lol. Thank you so much for the six stars, my friend, and the lovely review. Big hugs. Sandra xxx
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You're welcome, Sandra.
Phillip
Comment from Pantygynt
I am not very good at nit picking unless they leap off the page and bite me. None did this time. I thought this post thoroughly delightful. I thought the opening description of the scene inside the tepee, along with ellie fear and refusal to go with Herbie was very well done indeed. It reminded me of the final couplet of Hillaire Belloc's Poem Jim:
And always keep ahold of nurse
For fear of finding something worse.
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reply by the author on 26-Aug-2019
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I am not very good at nit picking unless they leap off the page and bite me. None did this time. I thought this post thoroughly delightful. I thought the opening description of the scene inside the tepee, along with ellie fear and refusal to go with Herbie was very well done indeed. It reminded me of the final couplet of Hillaire Belloc's Poem Jim:
And always keep ahold of nurse
For fear of finding something worse.
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Comment Written 26-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2019
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That is such a lovely review, Jim, thank you so very much. I agree with you and Hillaire Belloc's poem, it holds true for any scary situation. Big hugs, my friend. :)) Sandra xx
