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A woman becomes fixated on Rob

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Comment from Iza Deleanu
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Wow this chapter is part of the - how to get away with murder motif - all the details are laid out, the perfect criminal mind. Monica is on the hunt again and her diabolical plan for the next victim gives me shivers. Good luck with the next chapter and thank you for sharing.

 Comment Written 26-Aug-2019


reply by the author on 27-Aug-2019
    Thank you so much. rox
Comment from Mistydawn
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Oh no, not Sarah too. I do hope someone comes forward soon. The chapter is very well-written, interesting start to finish. The part about the stomach contents was funny, onery doc.

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 Comment Written 26-Aug-2019


reply by the author on 27-Aug-2019
    Yes, Sarah. We shall see what happens. Bawhaha. Thanks so much dear. Rox
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
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Everything is going on in terms and process of real police investigation of murder; crime and mystery in plot progression is professionally promoted; Monica is now in more confident; well said, well done. Liked and enjoyed the read.

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 Comment Written 26-Aug-2019


reply by the author on 27-Aug-2019
    Thank you sir. Rox