Timeless Love
The cleansing...2 total reviews
Comment from Iza Deleanu
The way your words are drifting on the paper makes the shape of a bird, which is beautiful but hard to read. The message of the poem is "Love is timeless, swift and bitter,but lives the spirit unscathed and purified. Good luck with the context.
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2019
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The way your words are drifting on the paper makes the shape of a bird, which is beautiful but hard to read. The message of the poem is "Love is timeless, swift and bitter,but lives the spirit unscathed and purified. Good luck with the context.
Comment Written 24-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2019
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Thank you! I?m glad you were able to see how it flowed. Each section has its own design hoping to show a picture of the idea within each. This is one of the ?outside the poets box? poems I like to write! xoxo
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I used to write like that:) is beautiful
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You should write more then!! xoxo
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
I finally worked our the flow of your words which I found a bit confusing at first, but now I understand after reading it twice, new love always gives us a new perspective on life, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2019
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I finally worked our the flow of your words which I found a bit confusing at first, but now I understand after reading it twice, new love always gives us a new perspective on life, love Dolly x
Comment Written 24-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2019
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Thank you! I?m glad you were able to see how it flowed. Each section has its own design hoping to show a picture of the idea within each. This is one of the ?outside the poets box? poems I like to write! xoxo
