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a 5 line poem entry12 total reviews
Comment from Y. M. Roger
Well, there is but one word to describe this beautiful offering, June: PERFECT! :) I am so very glad (for this brief moment!) to be so very far behind in my reviewing because I now have a six to give you for this beauty! ;) :) I expect to see this one on the marquis, ma'am -- thank you for sharing! ;) Yvette
P.S. So sorry for the delayed review - the beginning of school combined with getting the boys off to college (they're all out there now - so quiet round here!!) has me struggling to find a routine... I PROMISE to be there soon - and, believe me, that's more for the OCD blonde over here than for you - LOL! ;) ;) Take care!
reply by the author on 25-Aug-2019
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Well, there is but one word to describe this beautiful offering, June: PERFECT! :) I am so very glad (for this brief moment!) to be so very far behind in my reviewing because I now have a six to give you for this beauty! ;) :) I expect to see this one on the marquis, ma'am -- thank you for sharing! ;) Yvette
P.S. So sorry for the delayed review - the beginning of school combined with getting the boys off to college (they're all out there now - so quiet round here!!) has me struggling to find a routine... I PROMISE to be there soon - and, believe me, that's more for the OCD blonde over here than for you - LOL! ;) ;) Take care!
Comment Written 25-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 25-Aug-2019
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Appreciate very much your taking some of your precious time to drop by and review.
Comment from BeasPeas
Hi June. A lovely five-line poem for the contest, illustrated beautifully. Good word choices in this gentle message. I like "mists of morning." Best of luck in the contest. Marilyn
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2019
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Hi June. A lovely five-line poem for the contest, illustrated beautifully. Good word choices in this gentle message. I like "mists of morning." Best of luck in the contest. Marilyn
Comment Written 24-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2019
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Thank you for your supportive comments!
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written five-Line poem about seeing the evidence of God's handiwork in the morning when the mist disappear and the beauty of nature is revealed in front of our eyes.
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2019
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A very well-written five-Line poem about seeing the evidence of God's handiwork in the morning when the mist disappear and the beauty of nature is revealed in front of our eyes.
Comment Written 24-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2019
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Thank you!
Comment from Rikki66
Good luck in the contest. You have written the genesis in five lines. Very good work.******************************************************************************************************************
RikkiLXVI
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2019
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Good luck in the contest. You have written the genesis in five lines. Very good work.******************************************************************************************************************
RikkiLXVI
Comment Written 24-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2019
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Thank you for your supportive review!
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You are sure welcome.
Rikki
Comment from Sugarray77
What a lovely introduction to this verse...mists of morning...the poem reminds me of swirling, vaporish fog that parts and shows us a little bit of Eden. Very well done, June, a perfect entry.
Melissa
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2019
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What a lovely introduction to this verse...mists of morning...the poem reminds me of swirling, vaporish fog that parts and shows us a little bit of Eden. Very well done, June, a perfect entry.
Melissa
Comment Written 24-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2019
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Thank you for your beautiful review! You always sound so lyrical - even when you're not writing a poem!
Comment from Susan X Smith
This is a simple yet effective piece. I liked the picture you chose to go with it. I especially liked the last line. Good luck in the contest judging and in your future writing.
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2019
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This is a simple yet effective piece. I liked the picture you chose to go with it. I especially liked the last line. Good luck in the contest judging and in your future writing.
Comment Written 24-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2019
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So glad you enjoyed this piece. Appreciate your taking the time to read and share your insights.
Comment from Iza Deleanu
I love the illustration which embrace the context of the poem very well. The signature of His mighty love is the mist of the morning. Thank you so much for sharing.
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2019
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I love the illustration which embrace the context of the poem very well. The signature of His mighty love is the mist of the morning. Thank you so much for sharing.
Comment Written 24-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2019
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So glad you enjoyed this piece. Appreciate your taking the time to read and share your insights.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
A fine faithful and uplifting write with a sense of a new beginning within these words, nature has the power to lift our spirits, all we need to do is watch and listen, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2019
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A fine faithful and uplifting write with a sense of a new beginning within these words, nature has the power to lift our spirits, all we need to do is watch and listen, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 24-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2019
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So glad you enjoyed this piece. Appreciate your taking the time to read and share your insights, Dolly.
Comment from Joan E.
The striking artwork you selected is the perfect reinforcement for your 5-Line Poem. Your alliteration of "m's" adds to the intensity of your description. Best wishes in the competition- Joan
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2019
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The striking artwork you selected is the perfect reinforcement for your 5-Line Poem. Your alliteration of "m's" adds to the intensity of your description. Best wishes in the competition- Joan
Comment Written 24-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2019
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So glad you enjoyed this piece. Appreciate your taking the time to read and share your insights.
Comment from tfawcus
I love the way you have presented this - the combination of picture and background colour. Your short ekphrastic poem complements it beautifully. A fine example of God's mighty handiwork. My! They don't half screech, though! LOL
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2019
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I love the way you have presented this - the combination of picture and background colour. Your short ekphrastic poem complements it beautifully. A fine example of God's mighty handiwork. My! They don't half screech, though! LOL
Comment Written 24-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2019
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So glad you enjoyed this piece. Appreciate your taking the time to read and share your insights, Tony. Always nice to hear from you.
