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Magical Maneuverability

So many Disney kisses...what if the couples got to choose?

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Comment from lyenochka
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Okay so you merged the Frog Prince and Snow White together and got an interesting mix. You might want the Russian version where the frog is a princess which would make the production of tadpoles more likely? Lol.

 Comment Written 23-Aug-2019


reply by the author on 23-Aug-2019
    She's not a frog. 😉 Thanx for dropping in on this on, ma'am! 🌞🌞 Have a great weekend! ;) Take care.
reply by lyenochka on 23-Aug-2019
    I know she's not in your story. In the Russian version of the fairy tale, there is a frog princess not a frog prince. You have a lovely weekend, too!
Comment from Loren .
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Yvette, stop it! No, I can't ask you to do that. I will not take this post at its face value and look for symbolism and similes. And, if I can't find any, then the fault is mine, not yours. I just need to read more to understand what the heck is being said. Have a great Friday evening. The week is done. As Scarlet once said: "Tomorrow is a new day." Good advise for us all. Loren

 Comment Written 23-Aug-2019


reply by the author on 25-Aug-2019
    No metaphors. No nothing but a headful of nonsensical thoughts that had to be purged...LOL! And, yes, I am slowly starting to find my footing in this new year... I have fewer autistic children than last year, but my classes are very unbalanced when it comes to skills, so that's making things a bit interesting.... but I'm getting there! ;) ;) Thanx for putting up with the blondeness for a bit!! ;) :) Take care! ;) Yvette
Comment from damommy
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So Charming has turned into a frog? That's the wrong way. hahaha. I suspect the tadpoles are named after the Seven Dwarfs. Cute story. It seems he gave up his crime to swim with his buddies.

 Comment Written 23-Aug-2019


reply by the author on 23-Aug-2019
    Yeah, it was just a fun write to say goodbye to the week...LOL! ;) :) The intent was to elicit a smile -- hopefully it worked! ;) ;) Glad you enjoyed! ;) Take care! ;) Yvette ;)
reply by damommy on 23-Aug-2019
    It did!
Comment from Robert Zimmerman
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Hello Yvette. Well now we know that Prince charming and Snow White are amphibians. That is something I certainly never expected. I do have an idea what the tadpoles were called. Polly and Wog.

 Comment Written 23-Aug-2019


reply by the author on 23-Aug-2019
    Not both, just the Prince. :) :) Snow White's the princess in the castle with the Queen.. :) :) Thanx for the review, Z -- have a great weekend! ;) ;) Yvette
reply by Robert Zimmerman on 23-Aug-2019
    OK. Did I get the names right? :)
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2019
    Nah... they were named after the seven dwarves, silly! ;) :) Take care, you!! ;) :)
reply by Robert Zimmerman on 23-Aug-2019
    Wow. I missed that one a mile. I think I need to sit down and rest for an hour. Z.
Comment from Joan E.
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Thanks for sharing your fun. My son who works for the Disney Studios would be proud of this updating of the classic. I enjoyed your contemporary dialog. Was the name "Sneezy"? Best wishes in the Flash Fiction Contest- Joan

 Comment Written 23-Aug-2019


reply by the author on 23-Aug-2019
    Yep, Sneezy it is! ;) He's one of Princess Snow White's friends! ;) :) LOL! :) And I'm not holding my breath on a place in the contest, Joan -- it was just a fun write to say goodbye to the week...LOL! ;) :) The intent was to elicit a smile -- it seems to have worked! ;) ;) Glad you enjoyed! ;) Take care! ;) Yvette ;)
reply by Joan E. on 23-Aug-2019
    Yes--smiles galore! And happy weekend when it arrives- Joan
Comment from Sally Law
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I thought he was too handsome to be true. Anyone who can't focus on cookies is highly suspect. This is fun and fresh. I just love it. A great entry for the contest.
Sending you my best today with best wishes for the flash fiction contest,
Sal xo

 Comment Written 23-Aug-2019


reply by the author on 23-Aug-2019
    Yeah, not holding my breath on a place in the contest, Lady Sal -- it was just a fun write to say goodbye to the week...LOL! ;) :) The intent was to elicit a smile -- it seems to have worked! ;) ;) Glad you enjoyed! ;) Take care! ;) Yvette ;)
Comment from Lobber
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Hi,
I'm 72 and grew up with Disney but it was mostly Mickey Mouse Club and later as an adult Disney World. What the tads ate named I have no idea...good luck with the contest. - Lobber

 Comment Written 23-Aug-2019


reply by the author on 23-Aug-2019
    Wow... only one star, Lobber? I didn't think it was that bad...
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reply by Lobber on 23-Aug-2019
    Wow! An error!! An auto-typo ...how do I fix? - Lobber
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reply by the author on 23-Aug-2019
    Just click on the link to the story. At the bottom there, your review should still be written in the box. Just go ahead and select your preferred rating and hit the 'Save' button again... it will update the number of stars to your new choice.
    Thank you so very much, Lobber -- I do appreciate it, sir!! ;) ;) Yvette
Comment from Colin John
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Hi Yvette , this is a charming , excuse the pun but it is Friday lol , no I cannot guess what the tadpoles are called , a lovely story . Kind regards Colin xx

 Comment Written 23-Aug-2019


reply by the author on 25-Aug-2019
    LOL! You are too funny, Sir Colin!! ;) ;) Thanx so very much for those lovely stars and for the great Friday gift (even though I'm just getting here on Sunday..... gosh, it's been a LOONG week!). You take care over there, sir! ;) Yvette
Comment from Janetsue
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I can see that you have successfully scratched the itch in your funny bone with this cute posting. The moral is that you never know what's going to follow a magical kiss. lol Best wishes, my friend, in the contest!

 Comment Written 23-Aug-2019


reply by the author on 23-Aug-2019
    Yeah, not holding my breath on a place in the contest, Janet -- it was just a fun write to say goodbye to the week...LOL! ;) :) Glad you enjoyed! ;) Take care! ;) Yvette ;)
reply by Janetsue on 23-Aug-2019
    Have a super weekend, Yvette! :-)
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2019
    You too, Janet!! ;) :)
Comment from Cindy Warren
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The prince seems to be enjoying life as a frog. You've got me curious. I'd like to know the rest of the story. What was the deal? And I don't remember any frogs in the story of Snow White. How did that happen?

 Comment Written 23-Aug-2019


reply by the author on 23-Aug-2019
    Magical Disney Kisses -- you just never know what will happen: mono, perpetual sleep, frogginess, and who knows what else!! ;) :) LOL! Thanx for the review...it was just a fun write to say goodbye to the week...LOL! ;) :) Glad you enjoyed! ;) Take care! ;) Yvette ;)