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Magical Maneuverability

So many Disney kisses...what if the couples got to choose?

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Comment from CrystieCookie999
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So cute. A fractured fairy tale where people still live happily ever after. That is, if Snow White did not fall in love with the enchanted prince who really was a frog after all. At least this is the take on that story this time around! Cookies from the human queen mother? So only part of the royal family was enchanted? Fun read, perhaps for age 10 up.

 Comment Written 24-Aug-2019


reply by the author on 25-Aug-2019
    Fracture Fairy Tale -- oh, i like that!! Might have to try another some time when I need some stress relief!! ;) ;) So glad you enjoyed the blonde's end of the week insanity, Crystie!! Couldn't pass up a no entry fee posting, yeah....LOL! ;) Thanx for the review! ;) Yvette
Comment from LisaMay
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What a fun fairytale mash-up! hints of Snow White, Cinderella, the Frog Prince, Seven Dwarfs... relationships, locations, responsibilities... There seems to be mixed up sexualities too. (I smiled at 'the former Prince') You DID have fun!
I didn't know that frogs don't eat cookies!! It was nice of the queen to make them and for her daughter to bring them down to the pond.

 Comment Written 24-Aug-2019


reply by the author on 25-Aug-2019
    I had a nutty, insane great time on this one, L-M, and I'm so very glad you saw it for what it was!! ;) :) I doubt frogs would ever eat cookies.... but then, I can't see my self sitting and conversing with one either... although I have been known to talk to the beautiful ones we have in the trees around here (but they don't talk back -- just eye me suspiciously!).... thanx for the review and the smile, ma'am -- take care! ;) Yvette
reply by LisaMay on 25-Aug-2019
    Some 'writes' are very enjoyable experiences... I can see you indulged yourself hugely with this one! I can imagine the looks on those frogs faces... here she comes again.
Comment from robyn corum
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Yvette,

Okay, here's what I'm taking away. Snow was the original amphibian in this version and Prince Charming CHOSE to kiss her and BECOME the frog - opting for a life of freedom and joy in the pond. (No meetings, public appearances, no hand-shaking and baby-kissing.)

This was a fun and unusual take on the same-ole, same-ole. Thanks!!



 Comment Written 24-Aug-2019


reply by the author on 25-Aug-2019
    It was the blonde needing to completely disconnect from reality (even in a fairy tale)...how'd I do? LOL! So glad you could find some humor and not go all philosophical on me... SO refreshing!! ;) :) Thanx for YOU, Lady R -- come September, I hop you have a free Tuesday in there! Take care! ;) Yvette
Comment from Mystic Angel 7777
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This meets the contest requirements nicely as you deliver a complete story in the word count allotted. The use of a well-known fairytale to build upon is clever and I hope it works for you. Good luck in the judging and thank you very much for sharing it.

 Comment Written 24-Aug-2019


reply by the author on 25-Aug-2019
    Yeah, not holding my breath on a place in the contest, Angel -- it was just a fun write to say goodbye to the week...LOL! ;) :) The intent was to elicit a smile -- hopefully, it worked! ;) ;) Glad you enjoyed! ;) Take care! ;) Yvette ;)
Comment from James W. Reynolds
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This is a fun twist on an old fairy tale. I like the surprise of the prince being turned into a frog and enjoying the escape from royal responsibilities - how he builds an apparently happy life.

 Comment Written 24-Aug-2019


reply by the author on 25-Aug-2019
    Glad you found this one interesting, James -- it was just a crazy write to say goodbye to the week...LOL! ;) :) The intent was to elicit a smile -- hopefully, it worked! ;) ;) Glad you enjoyed! ;) Take care! ;) Yvette ;)
Comment from barkingdog
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And this story is 'such a strange thing'. hahaha I love it. What an imagination you have! He went from prince to frog and actually has a family ... tadpoles of course.
Love this possibility. Good twist on an old story.
:) e

 Comment Written 24-Aug-2019


reply by the author on 25-Aug-2019
    LOL!! :) :) So glad you enjoyed my dance into insanity to 'bleed off' a little stress from the week! ;) :) My intent was to elicit a smile -- and it seems to have worked! ;) ;) Glad you enjoyed! ;) Take care! ;) Yvette ;)

Comment from JudyE
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That's a very cute story. You have a really vivid imagination and come up with all sorts of wonderful stories. Thanks for sharing this one with us and good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 24-Aug-2019


reply by the author on 25-Aug-2019
    Yeah, not holding my breath on a place in the contest, Lady Judy-- it was just a fun write to say goodbye to the week...LOL! ;) :) The intent was to elicit a smile -- it seems to have worked! ;) ;) Glad you enjoyed! ;) Take care! ;) Yvette ;)

Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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A fun fantasy fairytale from a different point of view here Yvette, and your imagination ran riot with this one, a magical walk into fairyland here, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 24-Aug-2019


reply by the author on 25-Aug-2019
    Definitely a bit of insanity, but it was a 'necessary crazy' write to say goodbye to the week...LOL! ;) :) The intent was to elicit a smile -- hopefully it worked! ;) ;) Take care, Dolly! ;) Yvette ;)
Comment from DonandVicki
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I think that I like your take on sleeping beauty more than the original. It could be because you use a modern approach to the story. Well written and I wish I had a six.

 Comment Written 23-Aug-2019


reply by the author on 25-Aug-2019
    Oh, don't fret the sixer on this one, my dear!! ;) :) This was the crazy blonde's funday Friday write to say goodbye to the week...LOL! ;) :) The intent was to elicit a smile -- it seems to have worked! ;) ;) Thanx for your awesome support -- Take care! ;) Yvette ;)
Comment from Dawn Munro
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Uh... No comment. I refuse. Uh-uh. No way. Oh OKAY, if you insist...
Prince Charming wanted to be a frog? He married someone other than Snow White? WHAT have you DONE? !!! (LOL)

As always, flawless. :)) (So who is the prince in Cinderella? I forget.)

 Comment Written 23-Aug-2019


reply by the author on 25-Aug-2019
    LOL! Craziness... that's what it is: craziness, I tell you! ;) ;) I think that I can almost see a light coming at the end of the insanity tunnel.... is that a good or a bad thing?! LOL! Thanx for the review on the blonde's Friday Fit, Lady Dawn! ;) You're awesome and you've given me back my smile -- thank you! ;) ;) Yvette
reply by Dawn Munro on 25-Aug-2019
    It was my pleasure. :)))