Following the Piper
Over the cliff3 total reviews
Comment from susand3022
My last one, Mike... because I saw that Pied Piper picture... knew exactly what you were going to say and laughed my ass off! Hahahahahahaha!!!! That was too funny... entirely creative and bloody well on the nose!!! Print it in leaflets and have it dropped by helicopter over the capital... about 10,000 copies ought to do it! Mostly over tourist areas but don't forget the residential areas! LOL
reply by the author on 25-Aug-2019
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My last one, Mike... because I saw that Pied Piper picture... knew exactly what you were going to say and laughed my ass off! Hahahahahahaha!!!! That was too funny... entirely creative and bloody well on the nose!!! Print it in leaflets and have it dropped by helicopter over the capital... about 10,000 copies ought to do it! Mostly over tourist areas but don't forget the residential areas! LOL
Comment Written 25-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 25-Aug-2019
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Thank you much, Susan, for the six star review!
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
In vision, the poet could see and find how Pied Piper has been taking away the American citizens to the cliff to give them punishment for their follies of trusting an inefficient leader who promised to Make America Great Again; in practice has lost the melody in American living; well said, well done. Liked and enjoyed the read. Write to Inspire, Change.
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2019
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In vision, the poet could see and find how Pied Piper has been taking away the American citizens to the cliff to give them punishment for their follies of trusting an inefficient leader who promised to Make America Great Again; in practice has lost the melody in American living; well said, well done. Liked and enjoyed the read. Write to Inspire, Change.
Comment Written 23-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2019
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Thank you, A. L. D!
Comment from CrystieCookie999
This is both subtle and strong. Great literary allusion to The Pied Piper of Hamelin. I like the illustration--maybe 19th Century? The line: "Our very own Rasputin, casting a spell, a mass trance" sure has some nice short a assonance. Thanks for contributing to social/political commentary poems!
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2019
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This is both subtle and strong. Great literary allusion to The Pied Piper of Hamelin. I like the illustration--maybe 19th Century? The line: "Our very own Rasputin, casting a spell, a mass trance" sure has some nice short a assonance. Thanks for contributing to social/political commentary poems!
Comment Written 23-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2019
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Thank you, C. C!
