The French Letter
Viewing comments for Chapter 82 "An Explosive Situation"A Novel
32 total reviews
Comment from robyn corum
Tony,
So... those rings came in handy after all. *smile* But I'm afraid our guy jumped from one pickle (a pseudo-engagement) into another (being chased by bad guys?).
This gets interestinger and interestinger. hahaha
Thanks!
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2019
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Tony,
So... those rings came in handy after all. *smile* But I'm afraid our guy jumped from one pickle (a pseudo-engagement) into another (being chased by bad guys?).
This gets interestinger and interestinger. hahaha
Thanks!
Comment Written 24-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2019
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Thanks, Robyn. There's never a dull moment. At least, that's what all the books on novel writing advise me. LOL
I'm expecting things to get even inerestinger as we near the climax.
All good wishes, Tony.
Comment from barkingdog
Are they in danger? Who would know that they are there on a mission?
I'm curious now about Rasheed. Is he more than merely a taxi driver?
The excitement has begun.
:) e
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2019
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Are they in danger? Who would know that they are there on a mission?
I'm curious now about Rasheed. Is he more than merely a taxi driver?
The excitement has begun.
:) e
Comment Written 24-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2019
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Thanks, Ellen. There certainly seems to be something more to Rasheed than meets the eye. And the black sedan - goodness knows where that came from - sure as heck, I don't! LOL
Comment from dejohnsrld (Debbie)
Tony, this is wonderfully written and the description of her appearance is amazing. It reminds me of Margaret's writing which I miss. Beautiful work, my friend~Debbie
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2019
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Tony, this is wonderfully written and the description of her appearance is amazing. It reminds me of Margaret's writing which I miss. Beautiful work, my friend~Debbie
Comment Written 24-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2019
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Many thanks, Debbie. I value your opinion, which makes the sixth star all the more valuable. Thanks very much. Best wishes, Tony
Comment from Tootsie55
Another great chapter. Always good reading and you always keep us in suspense. I loved the outfit Helen was buying.NO spags and Still SIXES to give ya! Keep up the good work, thanks.
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2019
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Another great chapter. Always good reading and you always keep us in suspense. I loved the outfit Helen was buying.NO spags and Still SIXES to give ya! Keep up the good work, thanks.
Comment Written 24-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2019
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Very many thanks, Geoffrey, both for your generous comments and for your generous stars. A welcome sparkle to brighten a dull winter's day!
Comment from Brenda Henderson
Way to really drive the narrative. This chapter remains true to the previous installments while continuing to draw your readers into the intrigue of both the plot line and the exotic locale. The characters are well developed and have real purpose in propelling the story forward. Well crafted!
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2019
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Way to really drive the narrative. This chapter remains true to the previous installments while continuing to draw your readers into the intrigue of both the plot line and the exotic locale. The characters are well developed and have real purpose in propelling the story forward. Well crafted!
Comment Written 23-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2019
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So kind of you to award a sixth star for this. Thank you for your comments about the characters, the setting, and the pace of the action. All good wishes, Tony
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You're very welcome!
Comment from royowen
I like the clever way leave the ending of episodes with a thirst denying situation Tony, keeping your readers interested and curiosity charged for the next one. Your writing is high quality with the skilled use of language, and a very mobile plot, well done, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2019
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I like the clever way leave the ending of episodes with a thirst denying situation Tony, keeping your readers interested and curiosity charged for the next one. Your writing is high quality with the skilled use of language, and a very mobile plot, well done, blessings Roy
Comment Written 23-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2019
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Very many thanks for your kind comments, Roy, and for the sixth star. Much appreciated. Have a great weekend. Tony
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You too
Comment from Gail Denham
Wow - a cliff hanger - and what's next. Again a very readable chapter with the events flowing smoothly - enjoyed this. And sounds quite plausible. Good job.
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2019
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Wow - a cliff hanger - and what's next. Again a very readable chapter with the events flowing smoothly - enjoyed this. And sounds quite plausible. Good job.
Comment Written 23-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2019
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Many thanks, Gail. Glad to hear that you thought the action scenes plausible and that the chapter read smoothly. I appreciate your supportive comments. All the best, Tony
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written chapter, luckily, the two spies survived the explosive at the market and heading back to their hotel thanks to the taxi driver who did not left them to do aso they wish, but there is someone following them.
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2019
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A very well-written chapter, luckily, the two spies survived the explosive at the market and heading back to their hotel thanks to the taxi driver who did not left them to do aso they wish, but there is someone following them.
Comment Written 23-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2019
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Very many thanks for you review and summary, Sandra. Wishing you a pleasant weekend. All the best, Tony
Comment from damommy
The fat's in the fire now. Maybe they shouldn't have run. The way he keeps popping up, maybe it's Bamforth in the car. 8-)
Great description of Helen's dance and clothing. Almost like being there.
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2019
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The fat's in the fire now. Maybe they shouldn't have run. The way he keeps popping up, maybe it's Bamforth in the car. 8-)
Great description of Helen's dance and clothing. Almost like being there.
Comment Written 23-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2019
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Thanks, Yvonne. Glad you found the descriptions realistic! Now that things are getting going at last, I hope I can maintain the impetus! All the best, Tony
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
I hope Rasheed hasn't trapped Charles and Helen!! What an exciting chapter, Tony. We start off with Helen in her 'wedding dress' to the consternation of Charles, LOL, and then a bombing, and now, either an abduction or, Rasheed will now drive like a bat out of hell and get them away from whoever is following him! Can't wait to find out! Well done, my friend, superb chapter. I'm not worried about waiting to give you a six this time, you always deserve one, but I know you will be posting another chapter very soon. :)) Sandra xxx
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2019
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I hope Rasheed hasn't trapped Charles and Helen!! What an exciting chapter, Tony. We start off with Helen in her 'wedding dress' to the consternation of Charles, LOL, and then a bombing, and now, either an abduction or, Rasheed will now drive like a bat out of hell and get them away from whoever is following him! Can't wait to find out! Well done, my friend, superb chapter. I'm not worried about waiting to give you a six this time, you always deserve one, but I know you will be posting another chapter very soon. :)) Sandra xxx
Comment Written 23-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2019
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Thanks, Sandra. The pace is certainly hotting up. I hope I can sustain it! There may be a slight pause while I work out how the heck that black car fits into the story! LOL
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That sounds like me, I'm often ending a part not knowing what the heck the next part it going to be like. Makes life exciting, doesn't it? lol.
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That sounds familiar, Tony, I often have no idea how the next part will go. lol.
