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Comment from susand3022
Hi Bill, Grace needs an instant pot and George needs to get a life! I mean really, the leftovers from an instant pot are going to be Georges rescue. LOL, I loved this... Go Gracie!!! Wham! Gotta love the imagery there... lol
Not as if we'd ever do it but you know that 98 out of 100 married women would have liked to do it at least once during their marriage! LOL
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2019
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Hi Bill, Grace needs an instant pot and George needs to get a life! I mean really, the leftovers from an instant pot are going to be Georges rescue. LOL, I loved this... Go Gracie!!! Wham! Gotta love the imagery there... lol
Not as if we'd ever do it but you know that 98 out of 100 married women would have liked to do it at least once during their marriage! LOL
Comment Written 21-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2019
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Thanks, Susan, for giving this a look. Bill
Comment from BeasPeas
This is just great. I enjoyed your unique story. It's funny, well described, and interesting. Grace is quite a devoted reviewer. And George would be better off learning to cook or going to the diner. Of course, there is always divorce. Marilyn
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This is just great. I enjoyed your unique story. It's funny, well described, and interesting. Grace is quite a devoted reviewer. And George would be better off learning to cook or going to the diner. Of course, there is always divorce. Marilyn
Comment Written 21-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2019
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I think if Mac and cheese make him kill, a pan shiner would bring a slightly worse reaction. She might want to hit him a couple more times.
Comment from JudyE
Great stuff! haha. Good for Grace. Perhaps now George will get his priorities in order. I loved this and it's a very worthy entry for the flash fiction competition. Good luck.
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Great stuff! haha. Good for Grace. Perhaps now George will get his priorities in order. I loved this and it's a very worthy entry for the flash fiction competition. Good luck.
Comment Written 21-Aug-2019
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Thank you, Judy
Comment from nomi338
Ha! Take that all you poetry haters! Indeed the pan and the pen are so much mightier than the sword. With the proper words I can turn you into anything I desire. I can make you shiver in the cold or I can set your body on fire. I think that you should open your eyes and see, you in all honesty, should have a healthy fear of me.
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Ha! Take that all you poetry haters! Indeed the pan and the pen are so much mightier than the sword. With the proper words I can turn you into anything I desire. I can make you shiver in the cold or I can set your body on fire. I think that you should open your eyes and see, you in all honesty, should have a healthy fear of me.
Comment Written 21-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2019
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Someone has a pan face out there.
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Mallard, Mallard, duck!
Comment from Mystic Angel 7777
LOL! It's a bit extreme, but I wouldn't be surprised if there were a number of spouses out there that consider FS a dirty word. This meets the contest requirements splendidly as you deliver a completely delightful story in exactly 150 words Good luck in the judging and thank you very much for sharing it.
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LOL! It's a bit extreme, but I wouldn't be surprised if there were a number of spouses out there that consider FS a dirty word. This meets the contest requirements splendidly as you deliver a completely delightful story in exactly 150 words Good luck in the judging and thank you very much for sharing it.
Comment Written 21-Aug-2019
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Thanks, MA
Comment from judiverse
Oh, dear me. Is this to be what happens if you spend a lot of time on FanStory? Great line with "The Pan is mightier than the sword." That doesn't stop her from returning to her writing, though. Personally, I'd be happy if my husband would make macaroni and cheese. After all, it comes in boxes. All he can make is microwave popcorn. Great entry for the flash fiction contest, and best of luck. judi
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Oh, dear me. Is this to be what happens if you spend a lot of time on FanStory? Great line with "The Pan is mightier than the sword." That doesn't stop her from returning to her writing, though. Personally, I'd be happy if my husband would make macaroni and cheese. After all, it comes in boxes. All he can make is microwave popcorn. Great entry for the flash fiction contest, and best of luck. judi
Comment Written 21-Aug-2019
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Thanks, Judi
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You're welcome. judi
Comment from Loren .
This was funny and I thoroughly enjoyed the play on words and tongue-in-cheek humor, It does make one wonder, however, just how this might mirror real life? in 150 words (Don't know how you are able to count correctly) you were able to bring this scenario to life. Good job! Loren
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This was funny and I thoroughly enjoyed the play on words and tongue-in-cheek humor, It does make one wonder, however, just how this might mirror real life? in 150 words (Don't know how you are able to count correctly) you were able to bring this scenario to life. Good job! Loren
Comment Written 21-Aug-2019
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Mirror real life? People are slaves to the internet. Pans hurt a lot. I wrote on Word and used it?s word count.
Comment from Alex Rosel
This is a bit of flash fiction fun, and it's a great entry for the contest {smiles}.
I didn't pick up on any spags. Having said that, I'm not a fan of multiple exclamation marks such as: "KONK!!!" But that's personal preference.
"The PAN is mightier than the sword!" -- Ha, ha. I love this twist {smiles}.
Good luck with the competition {smiles}.
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This is a bit of flash fiction fun, and it's a great entry for the contest {smiles}.
I didn't pick up on any spags. Having said that, I'm not a fan of multiple exclamation marks such as: "KONK!!!" But that's personal preference.
"The PAN is mightier than the sword!" -- Ha, ha. I love this twist {smiles}.
Good luck with the competition {smiles}.
Comment Written 21-Aug-2019
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My finger must have gotten stuck on the shha-boink key.
Comment from lyenochka
Lol. You create a humorous scene for your Fanstory readers here. I am surprised this grown man can't make his own lunch. Instead of violence, the right response would be to get his own Fanstory account and review his wife's works.
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Lol. You create a humorous scene for your Fanstory readers here. I am surprised this grown man can't make his own lunch. Instead of violence, the right response would be to get his own Fanstory account and review his wife's works.
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Comment Written 21-Aug-2019
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He would be the bitter reviewer sporting a cartoonishly flattened face.
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Comment from Iza Deleanu
Very funny Japanese swords against iron skillet:) the master of words against the master of laziness, macaroni and cheese a good reward for staying in the shadow of the Mighty Grace. Good luck with the contest.
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Very funny Japanese swords against iron skillet:) the master of words against the master of laziness, macaroni and cheese a good reward for staying in the shadow of the Mighty Grace. Good luck with the contest.
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Comment Written 21-Aug-2019
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Thank you, Iza.
