Sudden Love
A garden story25 total reviews
Comment from brenda faye curtis
This is a very well -constructed story that perfectly describes the expression of the little (squirrel, I think?). The story is funny, descriptive and has a nice tag a the end.
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2019
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This is a very well -constructed story that perfectly describes the expression of the little (squirrel, I think?). The story is funny, descriptive and has a nice tag a the end.
Comment Written 23-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2019
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Thanks, Brenda. xxx
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You're welcome, Maria. :)
Comment from Rikki66
Love can be a treacherous thing, especially interspecies romances. In this tale, the squirrel changes places with the grasshopper. Very good.
LXVI)))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2019
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Love can be a treacherous thing, especially interspecies romances. In this tale, the squirrel changes places with the grasshopper. Very good.
LXVI)))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))
Comment Written 23-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2019
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Thanks so much for reading, Rikki.
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Welcome.
LXVI
Comment from Y. M. Roger
Hooray for crazy ladies and their 'food leaving-out habits' (I proudly count myself in that group!) and, most importantly, hooray for precious squirrel pics!! ;) You are so right - this picture is wonderful!! ;) :) Loved your take on it, as usual, Lady Maria! ;) Thanx for sharing! ;) Yvette
P.S. So sorry for the delayed review - the beginning of school combined with getting the boys off to college (they're all out there now - so quiet round here!!) has me struggling to find a routine... I PROMISE to be there soon - and, believe me, that's more for the OCD blonde over here than for you - LOL! ;) ;) Take care!
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2019
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Hooray for crazy ladies and their 'food leaving-out habits' (I proudly count myself in that group!) and, most importantly, hooray for precious squirrel pics!! ;) You are so right - this picture is wonderful!! ;) :) Loved your take on it, as usual, Lady Maria! ;) Thanx for sharing! ;) Yvette
P.S. So sorry for the delayed review - the beginning of school combined with getting the boys off to college (they're all out there now - so quiet round here!!) has me struggling to find a routine... I PROMISE to be there soon - and, believe me, that's more for the OCD blonde over here than for you - LOL! ;) ;) Take care!
Comment Written 23-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2019
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Thanks for this fun review, Yvette.
Comment from Bucketlist
A fantasy, packed full of description , feelings, and a cute picture. Who needs more? I'm learning that asking doesn't get assessment, I just have learn by teacher example, thanks for sharing,
Hugs, Trisha
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2019
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A fantasy, packed full of description , feelings, and a cute picture. Who needs more? I'm learning that asking doesn't get assessment, I just have learn by teacher example, thanks for sharing,
Hugs, Trisha
Comment Written 22-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2019
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Thanks, Trisha.
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Denada
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It's two words: De nada. ;)
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SOR RY EXCOOZ MEEE
Haha
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:)
Comment from Sugarray77
This is so unusual to see a write about a squirrel that is obviously emotionally attached to the yellow gerbera daisy. Very different... I liked your take on it and think you are write about using a ..love.. theme. Well done, Maria, as always.
Melissa
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2019
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This is so unusual to see a write about a squirrel that is obviously emotionally attached to the yellow gerbera daisy. Very different... I liked your take on it and think you are write about using a ..love.. theme. Well done, Maria, as always.
Melissa
Comment Written 22-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2019
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Thanks for reading, Melissa. xxx
Comment from Robert Zimmerman
Hello Maria. This is a very likable story about the squirrel that has become confused after falling in love with a flower. It seems he is deserting the rest of his obligations in life just to court the flower. Robert
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2019
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Hello Maria. This is a very likable story about the squirrel that has become confused after falling in love with a flower. It seems he is deserting the rest of his obligations in life just to court the flower. Robert
Comment Written 22-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2019
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Thanks, Robert. Have a great day.
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You're welcome!
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
#aww, I 've just read Debra's and hot-footed it over to read yours. It seems that love isn't what it first appeared when I read Debra's. This one tells of love at first sight, when the golden hair is shining, and the face if beaming. But, I guess the golden locks aren't lasting because on Debra's it looks like he's having second thoughts. You will have to write another one so we know what's going on. I hope he isn't one of the fickle boys who only love 'em when they are pretty? LOL. Wonderful, Maria. This story could go on for quite a while! :)) Sandra xx
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2019
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#aww, I 've just read Debra's and hot-footed it over to read yours. It seems that love isn't what it first appeared when I read Debra's. This one tells of love at first sight, when the golden hair is shining, and the face if beaming. But, I guess the golden locks aren't lasting because on Debra's it looks like he's having second thoughts. You will have to write another one so we know what's going on. I hope he isn't one of the fickle boys who only love 'em when they are pretty? LOL. Wonderful, Maria. This story could go on for quite a while! :)) Sandra xx
Comment Written 22-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2019
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I don't think he's having second thoughts. I think he's sad because he's losing her... He's a nice guy ;)
Thanks for reading.
Comment from JudyE
This is so cute. What a lovely photo and a great little story to go with it. That little creature - is it a chipmunk? - does look to be enamoured by the flower. I'm now off to read Debra's story.
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2019
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This is so cute. What a lovely photo and a great little story to go with it. That little creature - is it a chipmunk? - does look to be enamoured by the flower. I'm now off to read Debra's story.
Comment Written 22-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2019
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The caption said squirrel. But chipmunks are a kind of NA squirrel, aren't they?
Thanks for reading.
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We don't have eiher in Australia so I wouldn't like to guess. :)
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I didn't know. We only have squirrels in Spain.
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written short story about the squirrel that's falling in love with the little yellow dandelion. In winter food is scarce and then the lady of the house leave him something to eat on the porch.
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2019
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A very well-written short story about the squirrel that's falling in love with the little yellow dandelion. In winter food is scarce and then the lady of the house leave him something to eat on the porch.
Comment Written 22-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2019
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Thanks, Sandra. xxx
Comment from lyenochka
Is that really a squirrel? Can't tell without seeing his tail. It's such a cute picture - he really does look like he's in love but alas, a flower doesn't last forever. He'll return to bachelorhood.
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2019
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Is that really a squirrel? Can't tell without seeing his tail. It's such a cute picture - he really does look like he's in love but alas, a flower doesn't last forever. He'll return to bachelorhood.
Comment Written 21-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2019
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The caption said so...
Thanks for reading.
