Comment from Bill Schott

Excellent

This 5-7-5, Perfect Night, has the right set up and presents a silent, starry, sky to draw the day's hectic activity from the mind and leave a peace that allows sleep.

 Comment Written 22-Aug-2019

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reply by the author on 22-Aug-2019

Thanks for the read and review.

Comment from JudyE

Excellent

This is a worthy entry for a thought-provoking haiku. The imagery of stars pricking the dark velvet sky is particularly effective in my opinion. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 21-Aug-2019

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reply by the author on 21-Aug-2019

Thanks much for your read, review and comment.

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

A very atmospheric write with a moonless sky at night when everyone can sleep under the black velvet sky in soft breezes, much enjoyed, best wishes for the contest, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 20-Aug-2019

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reply by the author on 20-Aug-2019

Thanks for the read and review. Hope you have a restful night.