A Bottle Of White, Bottle Of Red
All blind dates don't end alike.7 total reviews
Comment from Ric Myworld
Without a doubt, I could never have said it better myself. Living in a closed-minded world, bordering on mindless. It's always nice to drop into Fanstory for one of your diminutive joggles and a smile. Great job as always!
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2019
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Without a doubt, I could never have said it better myself. Living in a closed-minded world, bordering on mindless. It's always nice to drop into Fanstory for one of your diminutive joggles and a smile. Great job as always!
Comment Written 24-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2019
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Many thanks for your appreciation and star cluster. Another smile prompted is a writing success. Continued good luck in your own efforts.
Comment from country ranch writer
First impressions are always misconceiving. Thinking one will be sweet and nice only to turn out to be self centered and end up being a bitch in just a few minutes.
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2019
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First impressions are always misconceiving. Thinking one will be sweet and nice only to turn out to be self centered and end up being a bitch in just a few minutes.
Comment Written 21-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2019
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Thank you for the nice rating. Blind dates have always been a dice role, but in today's fractured society, it's more a game of 2-card guts.
Continued success in you writings.
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Comment from LisaMay
This is a wonderfully concise, well-written vignette that shows how some people just cannot accept other people's differences. That Claire definitely comes across as a bitch. As she is on a date, she is obviously single and may well remain in that state, also without family connections as she has insisted on being kept a secret. I like this little story a lot. It certainly has impact.
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2019
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This is a wonderfully concise, well-written vignette that shows how some people just cannot accept other people's differences. That Claire definitely comes across as a bitch. As she is on a date, she is obviously single and may well remain in that state, also without family connections as she has insisted on being kept a secret. I like this little story a lot. It certainly has impact.
Comment Written 20-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2019
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I am thankful for your appreciative words and fine rating. Wish you success with your own writing.
Comment from Lobber
Hi howard11,
You kind of left me when at the top you write - The hostess brought his date. I presume that the word hostess is feminine and the word his is masculine- So Is find a disconnect (or is it me?) - I'm liberal and open - red or white- veal or veg - Please, help educate me. - Lobber
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2019
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Hi howard11,
You kind of left me when at the top you write - The hostess brought his date. I presume that the word hostess is feminine and the word his is masculine- So Is find a disconnect (or is it me?) - I'm liberal and open - red or white- veal or veg - Please, help educate me. - Lobber
Comment Written 20-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2019
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Thank you for the nice rating. I can see where the initial sentence might be confusing, and a few changed words might have made circumstances clearer... a man waiting at table for his blind date. Good luck with your own future writing efforts.
Comment from DonandVicki
Yes we do live in an era where people think they have the arrogance to judge others on their political, food choices, dress code... I think we do not have the right to judge others or throw the first stone.
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2019
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Yes we do live in an era where people think they have the arrogance to judge others on their political, food choices, dress code... I think we do not have the right to judge others or throw the first stone.
Comment Written 20-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2019
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Glad my effort was appreciated. Thank you for the stars, and good luck with your own writing.
Comment from C. Gale Burnett
I really like this flash fiction story. So few words, but much meaning. The author notes were an added bonus. There are so many people like 'Claire' in this world, but fortunately, and hopefully, it is balanced out by the 'down to earth' and 'everyone is equal' individuals.
This is a great contest entry, and I wish you the very best!
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2019
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I really like this flash fiction story. So few words, but much meaning. The author notes were an added bonus. There are so many people like 'Claire' in this world, but fortunately, and hopefully, it is balanced out by the 'down to earth' and 'everyone is equal' individuals.
This is a great contest entry, and I wish you the very best!
Comment Written 20-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2019
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Thank your for the fine rating and personal thoughts, Good luck with your writing.
Comment from john mallahan
Oh boy. How can one flee over the difference in wine pedigree? Just indicates a difference, I think in the world we live in. If only, all could be more inclusive!
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2019
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Oh boy. How can one flee over the difference in wine pedigree? Just indicates a difference, I think in the world we live in. If only, all could be more inclusive!
Comment Written 20-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2019
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Nice thoughts and a fine rating. Thank you. Hope you have success in your own writing.
