Comment from Sugarray77

Excellent

Welcome back mermaids! I love your theme and the tone of your verse. May your seahorses transport you back to us in true style!! Glad to see your name again.

Melissa

 Comment Written 22-Aug-2019

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reply by the author on 18-Sep-2019

Thanks for reading and enjoying. Elaine

Comment from Ricky1024

Excellent

"In the breath of the 'Human Mind.'
"And in mere seconds of dismay..
The mermaid comes home to us ..
To share her words...
With us this day!
Welcome back Beautiful!
Ricky
Vb

 Comment Written 21-Aug-2019

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reply by the author on 18-Sep-2019

Beautiful words. Thanks for a poetic review that brings a smile to the mermaid's face. Elaine

reply by Ricky1024 on 18-Sep-2019

My pleasure Elaine.
Ricky

Comment from country ranch writer

Excellent

Sorry to hear you have a computer crash I hope you will be back among us pernamentaly soon. Miss your poems. Love your presentation.

 Comment Written 20-Aug-2019

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reply by the author on 18-Sep-2019

I am still without a computer but try to get to the library when I am able. Thanks so much for taking time to read and enjoy my poem. Elaine

Comment from judiverse

Excellent

Hello, Mermaids. I'd certainly been wondering about you. We missed you too. Your poem really describes your circumstances. Great expression in "words pour out like flying fish." The mermaid's muses, to no surprise, come from the creatures of the sea. I am glad the mermaid's back, swimming into a water of words. Nice alliteration there. Glad you're back. judi

 Comment Written 20-Aug-2019

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reply by the author on 18-Sep-2019

Thanks so much. I am still without a computer which is hard. Hopefully this Fall I will be able to purchase one. I miss Fanstory so much. Thanks for your thoughtful review. Elaine

reply by judiverse on 18-Sep-2019

You're welcome. If there's a library near you, you could get access to a computer there. judi

Comment from Pam (respa)

Excellent

-Nice to see you back, Elaine!
-Hope all is well.
-Nice artwork and presentation.
-I like your poem about
being back on FS and how
you incorporate mermaid,
and mermen, imagery!
-I like all of the ocean
imagery, too.
-Thanks for sharing.

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 Comment Written 20-Aug-2019

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reply by the author on 20-Aug-2019

You made my day with such a nice review. I am glad to be back in the poetic atmosphere! Thanks again. Elaine

reply by Pam (respa) on 20-Aug-2019

You are very welcome, Elaine, and I appreciate your reply. If you have time, check out my three goslings with different viewpoints! I think you will smile even more!

Comment from Janilou

Excellent

the mermaid returns
guidance by the muses

more seahorses, whales
mermen..oooh

I really like these lines. Sorry to hear your computer is down. Glad the library has one, but I can feel for you - that's inconvenient.

Loved your poem. No errors noted.
Jan


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 Comment Written 20-Aug-2019

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reply by the author on 20-Aug-2019

I appreciate your thoughtful review and taking time to read my poem. It is difficult without a computer, I hope to buy another one soon. Elaine