Newly in Love
Nice Memory7 total reviews
Comment from Janilou
It's a delightful poem, but I have to take issue with the title, saying Newly In Love. :-) My husband and I have been married twenty years in March 2020, and just two nights ago, he surprised me by stopping to pick up a wine cooler for each of us, then driving us to a quiet country location on a dirt road. We sat on the grass next to the road on a little hill and watched the sunset, then the stars come out. Then we danced to romantic songs on that quiet little dirt road. The stars of the Milky Way made up for the lack of city skyline. LOL
Thanks for sharing this. I hope other reviewers discover, love doesn't have to be brand new to be very romantic.
Jan
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2019
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It's a delightful poem, but I have to take issue with the title, saying Newly In Love. :-) My husband and I have been married twenty years in March 2020, and just two nights ago, he surprised me by stopping to pick up a wine cooler for each of us, then driving us to a quiet country location on a dirt road. We sat on the grass next to the road on a little hill and watched the sunset, then the stars come out. Then we danced to romantic songs on that quiet little dirt road. The stars of the Milky Way made up for the lack of city skyline. LOL
Thanks for sharing this. I hope other reviewers discover, love doesn't have to be brand new to be very romantic.
Jan
Comment Written 20-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2019
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Thanks for the feedback and yes you are absolutely right. My wife and I have been married 14 years and the romance does still blossom. I was just trying to show the thrill of the newness of it all.
Comment from Patty Palmer
Ahh that is a pretty poem. And yes that seems about right for new love! Wouldn't it be great if we could capture that feeling and bottle it? Then we could make that new love spray and make our other half keep that new love feeling! We could write off divorces forever! And we could make a killing off of the profits!! LOL
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2019
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Ahh that is a pretty poem. And yes that seems about right for new love! Wouldn't it be great if we could capture that feeling and bottle it? Then we could make that new love spray and make our other half keep that new love feeling! We could write off divorces forever! And we could make a killing off of the profits!! LOL
Comment Written 20-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2019
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Don't tempt me lol
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LOL the new love spray is like spraying a car with a new love spray@@@
Comment from the13thpoet
Hello Wils a happy Tuesday to you. I really enjoyed your romance poetry. The words were simple and beautiful and flowed smoothly. The rhyme and rhythm of it was great as well. Good job!
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Hello Wils a happy Tuesday to you. I really enjoyed your romance poetry. The words were simple and beautiful and flowed smoothly. The rhyme and rhythm of it was great as well. Good job!
Comment Written 20-Aug-2019
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Some fond memories remembered here, 'playful tickling,' 'passionate kissing', we are in no doubt as to what is happening, a connection made here, love Dolly x
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Some fond memories remembered here, 'playful tickling,' 'passionate kissing', we are in no doubt as to what is happening, a connection made here, love Dolly x
Comment Written 20-Aug-2019
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
Like the harmony rhyming. It brings back memories of when the old was young or vice versa. Such a beautiful poem. Great wording, too. Keep up the good work.
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Like the harmony rhyming. It brings back memories of when the old was young or vice versa. Such a beautiful poem. Great wording, too. Keep up the good work.
Comment Written 20-Aug-2019
Comment from Susan X Smith
This is a very simple poem, yet it did the trick of conveying a new love. I especially liked the last two lines. Best of luck in your continued poetry writing. (Think about adding a picture next time.)
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2019
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This is a very simple poem, yet it did the trick of conveying a new love. I especially liked the last two lines. Best of luck in your continued poetry writing. (Think about adding a picture next time.)
Comment Written 20-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2019
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Tried to add a picture but couldn't find a good one on my phone. Is there a gallery or something that this site uses?
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Yes. You can choose to search this site or use your own computer. If you choose this site, there is a wide variety of photos to choose from.
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written poem about the memories of a newly found love. How you slowly explore togethet until you find each other's likes and dislikes, a first love is the one we never forgetseen.
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A very well-written poem about the memories of a newly found love. How you slowly explore togethet until you find each other's likes and dislikes, a first love is the one we never forgetseen.
Comment Written 20-Aug-2019
