If I Had Wings
A Villanelle for the Potlatch Challenge19 total reviews
Comment from Sugarray77
You wrote a lovely Villanelle, June. The theme, art, and presentation were lovely and such a good entry for the Potlatch prompt. The use of color and delightful insects makes this fun to read. Great job!.
Melissa
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2019
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You wrote a lovely Villanelle, June. The theme, art, and presentation were lovely and such a good entry for the Potlatch prompt. The use of color and delightful insects makes this fun to read. Great job!.
Melissa
Comment Written 22-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2019
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Thank you so much fir your encouraging feedback and generous rating!
Comment from Y. M. Roger
Oh, didn't (don't!) we all! :) Such a lovely offering, June, that cannot help but lift the spirits and return the mind to simpler, more imaginary fun instead of being lost in stress! ;) Thanx for the 'time out' for my psyche!! ;): ) Yvette :)
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2019
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Oh, didn't (don't!) we all! :) Such a lovely offering, June, that cannot help but lift the spirits and return the mind to simpler, more imaginary fun instead of being lost in stress! ;) Thanx for the 'time out' for my psyche!! ;): ) Yvette :)
Comment Written 22-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2019
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Thank you for your encouraging comments! Means a lot to me.
Comment from Janice Canerdy
Your villanelle is very well-written and appealing. You have made excellent use of specific details to describe the whimsical dreams of a child. I remember wishing I could fly; I actually flew--in my dreams!
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2019
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Your villanelle is very well-written and appealing. You have made excellent use of specific details to describe the whimsical dreams of a child. I remember wishing I could fly; I actually flew--in my dreams!
Comment Written 21-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2019
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Thank you for dropping by to read and share your insights! This one was s gin challenge.
Comment from Teri7
June, This is a very well written and very cute poem about If I Had Wings. You used very cute descriptive words and very lovely imagery from the art work you chose. I love it when I see a dragon fly flit by when I am sitting outside. They are very neat to watch. Great job on this Villianelle poem you penne for the potlatch Poetry. love and blessings, Teri
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2019
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June, This is a very well written and very cute poem about If I Had Wings. You used very cute descriptive words and very lovely imagery from the art work you chose. I love it when I see a dragon fly flit by when I am sitting outside. They are very neat to watch. Great job on this Villianelle poem you penne for the potlatch Poetry. love and blessings, Teri
Comment Written 21-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2019
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Thank you for taking the time to read and share your insights!
Comment from Pearl Edwards
Nicely penned Villanelle for the flying topic and your repeated lines work in well. Lovely descriptions as you take us through this dragonfly's day. Nice one,
cheers,
valda
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2019
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Nicely penned Villanelle for the flying topic and your repeated lines work in well. Lovely descriptions as you take us through this dragonfly's day. Nice one,
cheers,
valda
Comment Written 21-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2019
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Thank you for taking the time to read and share your insights!
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written Villanelle about flying. A dragonfly and a butterfly are great options they seem not dangerous to humans and they will not chase them down for a kill.
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2019
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A very well-written Villanelle about flying. A dragonfly and a butterfly are great options they seem not dangerous to humans and they will not chase them down for a kill.
Comment Written 21-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2019
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Thank you for sharing your insightful comments.
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
If you had wings, you had been either bright red butterfly or dragonfly and you had flown all day long and return back dancing to catch our eye; well said, well done. Liked and enjoyed the read. Write to Inspire, Change.
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2019
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If you had wings, you had been either bright red butterfly or dragonfly and you had flown all day long and return back dancing to catch our eye; well said, well done. Liked and enjoyed the read. Write to Inspire, Change.
Comment Written 20-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2019
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Thank you!
Comment from Rikki66
I wish I were a poet cause if you are wrong or right I would know it, I could tell you to this or that to make it write, I wish I was a poet.***************************************Good Job as best I can tell.
Rikki LXVI
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2019
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I wish I were a poet cause if you are wrong or right I would know it, I could tell you to this or that to make it write, I wish I was a poet.***************************************Good Job as best I can tell.
Rikki LXVI
Comment Written 20-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2019
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Very cute and clever response to this fun piece! Thanks fir reading and sharing your insights.
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Glad you liked my witticism.
LXVI
Comment from nancy_e_davis
If you want to be an insect I wouldn't recommend spying on Bullfrogs at all or you might end up on his darting tongue and supply him with a meal. LOL I for one would like to be an Eagle and I have written a couple of poems about that. Only a man can take an Eagle down. BUT! They are protected in the US. LOL Good Job, June. Nancy:)
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2019
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If you want to be an insect I wouldn't recommend spying on Bullfrogs at all or you might end up on his darting tongue and supply him with a meal. LOL I for one would like to be an Eagle and I have written a couple of poems about that. Only a man can take an Eagle down. BUT! They are protected in the US. LOL Good Job, June. Nancy:)
Comment Written 20-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2019
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I?m just a kid, what do I know? Just daydreaming... thanks for dropping by to read and review.
Comment from Joy Graham
I enjoyed reading your villanelle :) It is not an easy poetry form to work with, but yours is filled with fun and adventure. I would prefer to be a butterfly. Dragonflies seem scary to me. I wouldn't want to frighten people off.
Joy xx
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2019
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I enjoyed reading your villanelle :) It is not an easy poetry form to work with, but yours is filled with fun and adventure. I would prefer to be a butterfly. Dragonflies seem scary to me. I wouldn't want to frighten people off.
Joy xx
Comment Written 20-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2019
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Thank you for dropping by to read and share your sentiments on this fun little piece.
