cry wolf
a fable2 total reviews
Comment from Patty Palmer
I love it!! Nice story! Very well written! I like your imagination! Good luck with the contest! How often we see the local ambulance at the fast food places I can see this happening! Just joking!
"Keep right on writing!"
God bless!
Patty
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2019
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I love it!! Nice story! Very well written! I like your imagination! Good luck with the contest! How often we see the local ambulance at the fast food places I can see this happening! Just joking!
"Keep right on writing!"
God bless!
Patty
Comment Written 19-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2019
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Ha ha I was just having fun. Everyone thinks the fable is for the girl crying wolf, but it is for the second character. Thanks for the review, I appreciate your thoughts, cheers.
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lol You're welcome!
Comment from barkingdog
I'm not so sure about how the moral fits the story, but I liked the story. I'm wondering who shot who, now. Did she have a gun and shoot at the officer?
You left out quote marks for all speakers. Thus the four stars.
reply by the author on 19-Aug-2019
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I'm not so sure about how the moral fits the story, but I liked the story. I'm wondering who shot who, now. Did she have a gun and shoot at the officer?
You left out quote marks for all speakers. Thus the four stars.
Comment Written 19-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 19-Aug-2019
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Thanks for the review.
