Comment from Cindy Warren

Excellent

Ah yes, the air is definitely beginning to change. Fall is on its way. I do have to admit I love the smells. It's kind of sad we've had nothing but rain all summer, tho. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 18-Aug-2019

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reply by the author on 20-Aug-2019

Thanks for reviewing zanya

Comment from Jannypan (Jan)

Excellent

I enjoyed your contest entry, Mystery Author. Good job with the syllable count per line. Your picture pairs nicely with your well-chosen words. I like the idea of summertime breezes fading although that won't happen until early November here. Thanks for sharing and best wishes. Jan

 Comment Written 18-Aug-2019

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reply by the author on 20-Aug-2019

Thanks for reading - lucky ! Autumn doesn't arrive until Nov. ! zanya

reply by Jannypan (Jan) on 20-Aug-2019

But while we wait, we are having 100-106* for days and days in a row.

Comment from Pam (respa)

Excellent

-A good image and
presentation.
-The syllable count is good.
-The imagery and alliteration
are effective; we can picture
this autumn scene and take
in the scents it has to offer.
-Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 18-Aug-2019

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reply by the author on 20-Aug-2019

Great review zanya

reply by Pam (respa) on 20-Aug-2019

Thanks, zanya!