Comment from CEO2020

Exceptional

Apollyon started to smile, and then he found her mouth, kissing her. He held her even closer, next to his beating heart, which now belonged to her. Yelena made him feel alive in a way he had never been in his entire existence. Somehow, someway, he would find a way to keep his promise. Not only was he never letting go of his son, he wasn't letting go of Yelena either.

"Forever," he murmured against her lips.

EXCELLENT CLIFFHANGER!

 Comment Written 19-Aug-2019

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reply by the author on 20-Aug-2019

Thanks Neal! You're the best!

Sincerely,
Shana :)

Comment from ngage

Excellent

Great artwork setup, Ms. Shana! Your creativity shines on this chapter. The touching romance between your characters are very believable. As I read along, I could picture each scene in my head. You have a true talent in the way you tell your story. Looking forward in more!

Nate

 Comment Written 19-Aug-2019

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reply by the author on 19-Aug-2019

Thanks so much, Nate! :)

Glad you liked the photos. I enjoy creating pictures that remind me of the chapter. I'm overjoyed that you think the characters seem realistic. That really means a lot to me. Stay tuned my friend... more to come!

Hugs,
Shana :)

Comment from Mistydawn

Exceptional

This was a very emotional chapter, happy endings all the way around. I'm so glad it turned out the way it did, that they're a family once again. The chapter is very well-written, realistic, made me tear up. Great job as always.

 Comment Written 19-Aug-2019

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reply by the author on 19-Aug-2019

Awww... thanks girl! :)

Wow! This made my day! It's a dream hearing my characters brought emotions to the reader. That is so awesome! Stay tuned... I have more romance on the way. Hope you enjoy them all.

Hugs,
Shana :)

Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear

Excellent

I liked and enjoyed the read, the crafted taletelling, organized and balanced plot development, good characterization, realistic and contributory dialogues; well said, well done. Write to Inspire, Change.

 Comment Written 19-Aug-2019

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reply by the author on 19-Aug-2019

Thanks so much, Alcreator Litt Dear :)

Your review is so positive! I enjoy hearing from you my friend. Thanks again for all the encouraging words. I do appreciate it!

Sincerely,
Shana :)

Comment from Iza Deleanu

Exceptional

Awesome I think this book is going to be amazing. I read this chapter, and I was very easily transported into the story. I am excited to see what happens next.

 Comment Written 18-Aug-2019

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reply by the author on 19-Aug-2019

Thank you so much, Iza! :)

So glad you enjoyed the story. I hope you come back for more Breedline adventures. Thanks for all the positive and kind words. You made my day!

Sincerely,
Shana :)

reply by Iza Deleanu on 19-Aug-2019

You are welcome

Comment from fm wright

Exceptional

First of all, I love the artwork! Second of all, another tremendous chapter! Each chapter gets more exciting, if that is possible, as you build towards the climax. I am thoroughly intrigued to find out how the creature will be destroyed, as well as how the children will turn out.

 Comment Written 18-Aug-2019

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reply by the author on 19-Aug-2019

Thank you, dear friend :)
Your feedback is the best! You truly give me the inspiration to keep writing my story. I do appreciate all your kind words. You made my day!

Hugs,
Shana :)
p.s. there's more romance on the way. :)

reply by fm wright on 19-Aug-2019

Well, your story has it all!

Comment from royowen

Excellent

You old romantic, you. I was wondering about the others, you do such a great job with retracing your already established "heroes", and you realise how capable God is, and like a father of prodigal children, His love is greater than any sin they have committed, He forgives, cleanses them, and puts a new heart in them. God is so great, what a dad He is, and a mother, a wonderful episode, dripping with the love of God. Well done Shana, blessings Roy

 Comment Written 18-Aug-2019

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reply by the author on 19-Aug-2019

Thank you so much, Roy! :)
Yes, I'm a sucker for romance. Hee-hee! :)
I enjoyed getting to bring my 'evil' characters to the good side. I believe everyone gets a second chance if they just find it in their hearts to ask God. He can see the true sincerity. It just proves that He is a loving and forgiving Father.

I'm overjoyed that you approved of this chapter. Your encouraging words move me higher. I am blessed.

Always your fan,
Shana :)

reply by royowen on 19-Aug-2019

Well done sweet girl, I?m a secret romantic (don?t tell anyone) my elder child and me watched romance films together. Heh heh

Comment from Janilou

Excellent

I didn't catch any mistakes but it is a fascinating story. I think I reviewed an earlier chapter, but I'm not certain. This is very well written. I found the description of the baby inside the pregnant Yelena.

I found nothing to correct and I have no suggestions for improvement. It's great. Keep writing.
Jan

 Comment Written 18-Aug-2019

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reply by the author on 19-Aug-2019

Thank you, Jan :)

So glad you enjoyed my chapter. Thanks for taking the time for me. It's so nice to hear positive words. My story is very precious to me, and I cherish it when the reader enjoys them.

Thanks again,
Shana :)