An Angel in the Meadow
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Comment from Patty Palmer
Very interesting! I didn't expect that they would be snuggling and trying how to get Angel;'s bra off. LOL But, I'll be watching for more chapters to follow!
God bless!
Patty
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2019
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Very interesting! I didn't expect that they would be snuggling and trying how to get Angel;'s bra off. LOL But, I'll be watching for more chapters to follow!
God bless!
Patty
Comment Written 03-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2019
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Greetings, Patty!
A "SALUTE" for the review, kind words and taking the time to read our work. All of which is an honor. Our reply to you for saying, "I'll be watching for more chapters to follow" is "YA--thanks for making our day!" Best wishes and God Bless. Respectfully with Admiration, Cathy and Bill
Comment from Susan X Smith
Bret comes to life in the early part of the story when he was a child with Grandpa due to convincing dialogue. I assume that we will hear more about Cathy later, because so far, she is only seen though Bill's eyes. Enjoyed the read. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 30-Aug-2019
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Bret comes to life in the early part of the story when he was a child with Grandpa due to convincing dialogue. I assume that we will hear more about Cathy later, because so far, she is only seen though Bill's eyes. Enjoyed the read. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 30-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 30-Aug-2019
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Greetings, Susan!
Cathy and I "SALUTE," you for the review, kind words and taking the time to read our work. All of which is an honor. Your assumption of hearing more about Cathy later is correct. "You betcha!" Our response to your saying, "Enjoyed the read," is "YA, YA, YA--thanks for making out day!" Best wishes for an awesome weekend and God Bless.
Respectfully with Admiration,
Cathy and Bill
Comment from Robert Zimmerman
Hello Bill and Cathy. This certainly sounded familiar to me. And then I read your author's notes and solve it previous work was lost. That's a shame. I hope you are able to recover and get back on track. Best wishes. Robert
reply by the author on 30-Aug-2019
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Hello Bill and Cathy. This certainly sounded familiar to me. And then I read your author's notes and solve it previous work was lost. That's a shame. I hope you are able to recover and get back on track. Best wishes. Robert
Comment Written 29-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 30-Aug-2019
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Hello, Robert!
Are you looking? A "SALUTE," to you our friend! Cathy and I appreciate your review, kind words and taking the time to read our work. All the a above "IS AN HONOR!" YA, YA, YA--"THANKS FOR MAKING OUR DAY!" Thanks for the "BEST WISHES" too! Have an awesome weekend and God Bless.
Respectfully with Admiration,
Cathy and Bill
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You're welcome and thank you for the nice words.
Comment from Willie P. Smith
This is a delightful, but unlikely story. However, I too believe in angels. My departed wife is one of them. I really enjoyed reading the story and I am looking forward to the next chapter. Delightful.
reply by the author on 30-Aug-2019
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This is a delightful, but unlikely story. However, I too believe in angels. My departed wife is one of them. I really enjoyed reading the story and I am looking forward to the next chapter. Delightful.
Comment Written 29-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 30-Aug-2019
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Greetings, Willie!
Our condolence on the loss of your wife. Look...a "SALUTE!" Cathy and I appreciate your review, kind words and taking the time to read out work. All of the above is an honor. In response to you saying, "I am looking forward to the next chapter," we say, "YA, YA, YA--thanks for making our day! Best wishes for an awesome weekend and God Bless.
Respectfully with Admiration,
Cathy and Bill
Comment from pbomar1115
For the right man, only an Angel would give a man a chance with her today. The story hooked me line by line until I arrived at the end, which left me wanting more. Great writing.
Phillip
reply by the author on 30-Aug-2019
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For the right man, only an Angel would give a man a chance with her today. The story hooked me line by line until I arrived at the end, which left me wanting more. Great writing.
Phillip
Comment Written 29-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 30-Aug-2019
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Hello, Phillip!
Watch our hands...a "SALUTE!" Cathy and I appreciate your review, kind words and taking the time to read our work. All of which is an honor. Our reply to your saying, "The story hooked me line by line until I arrived at the end, which left me wanting more," is "YA, YA, YA--thanks for making our day!" Best wishes for an awesome weekend and God Bless.
Respectfully with Admiration,
Cathy and Bill
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You're welcome, Bill.
Phillip
Comment from robyn corum
Hey, guys,
Nice chapter -- right away, the couple meets and is making out??? Wow. That ain't how it was in the country I grew up in. hahaha The boys had to wait a weeeee bit longer than that!
Some notes:
1.) Laying back on the blanket, I watched the beautiful monarch
--> this is a form of dialogue, though it is narrative, so you can probably get away with it, but it should be 'lying'
2.) So, that being said, why don't we play (')Catch Me If You Can?('")
3.) "Oh, goody, goody! I'll let you do more than that. You (b)etcha!"
Thanks for the fun!
reply by the author on 30-Aug-2019
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Hey, guys,
Nice chapter -- right away, the couple meets and is making out??? Wow. That ain't how it was in the country I grew up in. hahaha The boys had to wait a weeeee bit longer than that!
Some notes:
1.) Laying back on the blanket, I watched the beautiful monarch
--> this is a form of dialogue, though it is narrative, so you can probably get away with it, but it should be 'lying'
2.) So, that being said, why don't we play (')Catch Me If You Can?('")
3.) "Oh, goody, goody! I'll let you do more than that. You (b)etcha!"
Thanks for the fun!
Comment Written 29-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 30-Aug-2019
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Hey, Robyn!
Look...a "SALUTE!" Cathy and I appreciate your review, kind words, help and taking the time to read our work. All of which is an honor. Are you listening? Here is our shoutout to you our friend, "When you write, your message is crystal clear, and always induces awe; inspiring an overwhelming feeling of reverence, admiration, and respect. Our reply to your saying, "Nice chapter." is "YA, YA, YA--thanks for making our day!" Great hearing from you. Best wishes for an awesome weekend and God Bless.
Respectfully with Admiration,
Cathy and Bill
Comment from dejohnsrld (Debbie)
This is a lovely story, my friend, and I love the ending--it was a surprise--at least to me. I'm looking forward to reading more of this, my friend~Debbie
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2019
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This is a lovely story, my friend, and I love the ending--it was a surprise--at least to me. I'm looking forward to reading more of this, my friend~Debbie
Comment Written 27-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2019
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Greetings, Debbie!
Are you looking? A "SALUTE," to you! Cathy and I appreciate your review, kind words and taking the time to read our work. All are an honor, our friend. In reply to your saying, "I'm looking forward to reading more of this," we say, "YA, YA, YA--thanks for making our day!" Best wishes and God Bless.
Respectfully with Admiration,
Cathy and Bill
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
I love to read about angels so I'll definitely follow your story. Such a great beginning. Playing the roles and narrating keeps you busy throughout the story. Keep up the great work. See you in the next chapter. Great story.
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2019
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I love to read about angels so I'll definitely follow your story. Such a great beginning. Playing the roles and narrating keeps you busy throughout the story. Keep up the great work. See you in the next chapter. Great story.
Comment Written 27-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2019
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Hi, Rosemary!
Look...a "SALUTE!" Cathy and I appreciate your "Exceptional Review, Kind Words and taking the time to Read Our Work!" All are an honor, our friend. In response to you saying, "See you in the next chapter," we say, "YA, YA, YA--thanks for making our day!" Best wishes and God Bless.
Respectfully with Admiration,
Cathy and Bill
Comment from Tpa
In some of your paragraphs, is God talking to Bret or his dead grandfather? I seemed to enjoy Bret's new angel. It seems to take on Adam and Eve's relationship. This chapter was very entertaining.
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2019
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In some of your paragraphs, is God talking to Bret or his dead grandfather? I seemed to enjoy Bret's new angel. It seems to take on Adam and Eve's relationship. This chapter was very entertaining.
Comment Written 27-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2019
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Greetings, Tpa!
On behalf of Cathy and myself, we "SALUTE," you for the review, kind words and taking the time to read our work. All are an honor! God is talking to Bret, our friend. In reply to your saying, "This chapter was very entertaining," we say, "YA, YA, YA--thanks for making our day!" Best wishes and God Bless.
Respectfully with Admiration,
Cathy and Bill
Comment from Mary Wakeford
I have had too many close calls to not believe in angels, so I was drawn to this story by the title. It is a whimsical write and delights the reader with conversation that is playful and this passage:
Yet, it's going to take an angel who is an expert on human behavior because she must contend with your 'attention-seeking, dramatic way of speaking, rapid shifts in emotion, and self-centered personality.' Have faith in me, my son--I'm looking." It made me laugh. Well done you two.
Hmmm, Vanderbilt Law School, not certain of your age, but did you know Jeanna Peeler, also a Vandy attorney? (from McEwen, TN originally).
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2019
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I have had too many close calls to not believe in angels, so I was drawn to this story by the title. It is a whimsical write and delights the reader with conversation that is playful and this passage:
Yet, it's going to take an angel who is an expert on human behavior because she must contend with your 'attention-seeking, dramatic way of speaking, rapid shifts in emotion, and self-centered personality.' Have faith in me, my son--I'm looking." It made me laugh. Well done you two.
Hmmm, Vanderbilt Law School, not certain of your age, but did you know Jeanna Peeler, also a Vandy attorney? (from McEwen, TN originally).
Comment Written 27-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2019
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Greetings, Mary!
Cathy and I reviewed your Profile "ABOUT." Quite impressive! I did four weeks of "Commando Training" at Luke AFB in Phoenix. No, I never met Jeanna Peeler. Look...a "SALUTE!" Thank you for the review, kind words and taking the time to read our work. All are an honor, our friend, Our reply to your saying, "Well done you two," is, "YA , YA, YA--thanks for making our day. Best wishes and God Bless.
Respectfully with Admiration,
Cathy and Bill
