Comment from the13thpoet

Excellent

Hello again. Though I have to say that I'm not an advocate for children being eaten, I did enjoy your story. To tell a story in so few words is difficult and you executed well. Good job and good luck.

 Comment Written 20-Aug-2019

Comment from Cindy Warren

Excellent

Haha, you must have woken up to screaming kids a few times, and I'm sure you're not the first one to want to feed them to the sharks! I'm sure many a shift worker has shared that thought. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 17-Aug-2019

Comment from kahpot

Excellent

This is one for the imagination, and I imagine Bruce is a Shark, as the ruckus would certainly be bouncing all over his wall, very well written and best wishes for your contest****kahpot

 Comment Written 17-Aug-2019

Comment from Darlene Franklin

Excellent

I wasn't aware that there were bedrooms and windows in the ocean . . . an unexpected, humorous thriller. Well done, and good luck with your contest entry.

 Comment Written 17-Aug-2019

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reply by the author on 17-Aug-2019

Everyone's house has a bedroom and windows, even a shark's

Comment from Ricky1024

Excellent

Interrupted sleep is a flash fiction contest entry rich in theme and imagery.
it read well flowed well with no grammar issues
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Adjective and Object Contents were both excellent and exceptional while descriptive measures aligned perfectly.
Good luck with this doctor Ricky 1024

 Comment Written 17-Aug-2019