Viewing comments for Chapter 19 "Flight of Fancy"
7 total reviews
Comment from Mystic Angel 7777
This meets the Club Challenge nicely as you make a valiant stab at the Villanelle form which is not an easy one to conquer. You have the rhyme scheme and repetitive lines down well, but the most important aspect of this style is to be written in solid iambic pentameter and this is clearly not even close. Well done and thank you very much for sharing it.
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2019
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This meets the Club Challenge nicely as you make a valiant stab at the Villanelle form which is not an easy one to conquer. You have the rhyme scheme and repetitive lines down well, but the most important aspect of this style is to be written in solid iambic pentameter and this is clearly not even close. Well done and thank you very much for sharing it.
Comment Written 26-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2019
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Thank you so much
Hugs, Trisha
Comment from Cheryl I
This is a nice poem about being free, being yourself and refusing to be manipulated by others. I really enjoyed reading it, and I am happy you continue to share your wonderful poems with us. Cheryl
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2019
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This is a nice poem about being free, being yourself and refusing to be manipulated by others. I really enjoyed reading it, and I am happy you continue to share your wonderful poems with us. Cheryl
Comment Written 25-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2019
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I?m honored by your review, thank you!
Hugs, Trisha
Comment from Teri7
This is a very well written Villanelle poem you have penned for the Potlatch Poetry. You used very good descriptive words and lovely imagery from the art work you chose. I enjoyed reading and reviewing this. love and blessings, Teri
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2019
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This is a very well written Villanelle poem you have penned for the Potlatch Poetry. You used very good descriptive words and lovely imagery from the art work you chose. I enjoyed reading and reviewing this. love and blessings, Teri
Comment Written 23-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2019
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Thank you, as always, for your great review. I?m glad you enjoyed the poem.
Hugs, Trisha
Comment from Rikki66
That is the problem with youth and millennials they have no imagination. They have been deprived of the ability to say what if and then visualize it.
RikkiLXVI
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2019
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That is the problem with youth and millennials they have no imagination. They have been deprived of the ability to say what if and then visualize it.
RikkiLXVI
Comment Written 23-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2019
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It?s not going to improve any time soon, either! I agree with your theory. Thank you Rikki. for your insightful review.
Hugs, Trisha
Enjoy your weekend.
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My week seems to be rainy hope yours is better/
Rikki LXVI
Comment from Y. M. Roger
Oh, this one is almost a siren call to the poet who likes to write of 'other worlds', Trisha!! ;) :) Great job on this one, ma'am -- beautiful! ;) Thanx for sharing! Yvette
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2019
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Oh, this one is almost a siren call to the poet who likes to write of 'other worlds', Trisha!! ;) :) Great job on this one, ma'am -- beautiful! ;) Thanx for sharing! Yvette
Comment Written 23-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2019
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I?m not sure if my penning is plagiarism or just fabulous writing. LOL you always seem to find someone?s style as a comparison . Lady, I?m just not that smart, but honest enough never to plagiarize. Thanks for a smokin?
review :):)
Hugs, Trisha
Comment from damommy
I love the message of your repeating lines. With imagination, we can go and be anything or anyone. Same with books. The written word is so powerful, yet full of enjoyment. Good Villanelle.
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2019
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I love the message of your repeating lines. With imagination, we can go and be anything or anyone. Same with books. The written word is so powerful, yet full of enjoyment. Good Villanelle.
Comment Written 23-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2019
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I started with books, but then decided it was too mundane. Thanks so much for your complimentary review
Hugs, Trisha
Comment from Iza Deleanu
Even if I read only the last portion of your poem I will still got inspired:"If you're a puppet, cut strings
Life is there, dream of flight
You can be so many things
Imagination gives you wings", you are so true imagination give you wings:)
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2019
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Even if I read only the last portion of your poem I will still got inspired:"If you're a puppet, cut strings
Life is there, dream of flight
You can be so many things
Imagination gives you wings", you are so true imagination give you wings:)
Comment Written 23-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2019
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Thank you Ida, for an encouraging complimentary review.
Hugs, Trisha
