Comment from Mistydawn

Excellent

Geese flying overhead for me is a heartbreaking sign because I know, winter is coming soon. The poem is well-written, your artwork is perfect for the poem.

 Comment Written 19-Aug-2019

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reply by the author on 22-Aug-2019

Thanks for your nice review.

Comment from Joan E.

Excellent

I enjoyed your interpretation of the photograph. I can see that you are already worried about the end of summer and the coming of a cold winter, and I admired your rhymes. Cheers- Joan

 Comment Written 18-Aug-2019

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reply by the author on 22-Aug-2019

Thanks for your nice review.

Comment from Sandra du Plessis

Excellent

A very well-written poem about Autumn and the falling leaves that predictseems the winter which is just around the corner and we should prepare for the snowy cold.

 Comment Written 18-Aug-2019

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reply by the author on 22-Aug-2019

Thanks for your nice review.

Comment from susand3022

Excellent

Hi Patricia, May I slow you down a bit? I already asked Dolly but she said no. It's too early for Fall. Can't we go back to Spring??? Let's skip Winter altogether!!! Then the majority of my pain can just stay away. I don't want to think about the cold. I'd rather be too hot. (Your poem's nice ... just the wrong season! LOL) :)

 Comment Written 17-Aug-2019

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reply by the author on 18-Aug-2019

Thanks for your review. I know it is too early for fall, but the inspiration was there wit the photo and I just had to write the poem.

Comment from Teri7

Excellent

Patricia, This is a very well written poem inspired by the photo. Reading your poem make me start to think about Fall and the leaves and weather being some cooler. You used great descriptive words and lovely imagery from the art work. Thanks for sharing. love and blessings, Teri

 Comment Written 17-Aug-2019

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reply by the author on 17-Aug-2019

Thanks for your review.

reply by Teri7 on 18-Aug-2019

you are so welcome. Beautiful work! love and blessings, Teri

Comment from judiverse

Excellent

Everyone's been writing about fall today. I can't believe it's almost upon us. Summer has gone by so quickly. You mention the signs of fall--the leaves falling and the Canadian geese calling. Then there's the dread thought that winter's not far behind. Excellent presentation. judi

 Comment Written 17-Aug-2019

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reply by the author on 17-Aug-2019

Thanks for your review.

Comment from Sugarray77

Exceptional

I really like this verse, Patricia. You did a great job in all aspects of this write. Your three points of autumn leaves, Canadian geese, and winter snows are sequential and tell a small story. Great job.

Melissa

 Comment Written 17-Aug-2019

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reply by the author on 17-Aug-2019

Thanks for your review.

Comment from Janetsue

Excellent

This is a beautiful 'change of season' posting that I appreciate reading so much on another 100+ degree heat index day. It is a very sensory poem with the lines mentioning Canada geese, autumn leaves, and winter snow.

 Comment Written 17-Aug-2019

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reply by the author on 17-Aug-2019

Thanks for your review.

Comment from misscookie

Excellent

Another GREAT WRITE MY FRIEND YOUR WORDS ARE RIGHT ON TIME.
YESTERDAY LEAVING THE DOCTOR A GROUP OF GEESE WERE WALKING ACROSS THE LAW.
THAT MUS BE AS SIGN THAT FALL IS ON IT'S WAY.
Cookie

 Comment Written 17-Aug-2019

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reply by the author on 17-Aug-2019

Thanks for your review.

reply by misscookie on 18-Aug-2019

Blessed Sunday You are very welcome
Cookie

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

We are feeling the same dreaded cold breezes and the chill in the air and feel cheated out of summer somehow, August has always been a warm month in England, but I have needed my coat lately, a fine write Patricia, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 17-Aug-2019

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reply by the author on 17-Aug-2019

Thanks for your review.