Consumption
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Comment from Mystic Angel 7777
All these wasted attempts to no avail. Did you ever consider that God was trying to tell you something? It is not up to us when and how we'll die - it's up to Him so don't try and mess with the plan cause that trick never works. Well done and thank you very much for sharing it.
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2019
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All these wasted attempts to no avail. Did you ever consider that God was trying to tell you something? It is not up to us when and how we'll die - it's up to Him so don't try and mess with the plan cause that trick never works. Well done and thank you very much for sharing it.
Comment Written 16-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2019
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Yes when I was in the second mental hospital way back in 06 my psychiatrist was released me after 2 weeks from Ancora state mental hospital New Jersey when she asked me the question about whatever attempt to do suicide again and I said of course not number one it hurts number 2 it's too damn hard to die!
Doctor Ricky 1024.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
You need to highlight your words Ricky so that it can be read properly, I will come back and review once you have made the adjustments, best wishes, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2019
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You need to highlight your words Ricky so that it can be read properly, I will come back and review once you have made the adjustments, best wishes, love Dolly x
Comment Written 16-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2019
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sorry about that that's actually the first time in six years I did a black on black background instead of a black background with a readable font!
Ricky
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I did the very same think on my poem too! He he he x
Comment from Agate Lucas
I think it's your background but I cannot read anything (everything's black on both my phone and my computer). I think you should change the settings for your poem ... I'll review your work as soon as I can ( for now all I can say is that you've chosen a nice picture!)
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2019
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I think it's your background but I cannot read anything (everything's black on both my phone and my computer). I think you should change the settings for your poem ... I'll review your work as soon as I can ( for now all I can say is that you've chosen a nice picture!)
Comment Written 16-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2019
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It's corrected I think you'll be well pleased.
Ricky
And thanks for the heads up!
Comment from Iza Deleanu
Sorry but I think your story is covered by black so unfortunately I couldn't read it. Was this an intentional choice or you have chose the wrong color. Please let me know because I would really like to read your story.
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2019
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Sorry but I think your story is covered by black so unfortunately I couldn't read it. Was this an intentional choice or you have chose the wrong color. Please let me know because I would really like to read your story.
Comment Written 16-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2019
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sorry dear that's the first time I've actually done a black one black background instead of using a readable font in six and a half years on this site.
Doctor Ricky 1024
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no worries it happen to me also last week:) I just wanted to let you know so you don't miss good reviews:)
