Comment from HarryT

Good

This is good write, holding a firm expression of faith. A fine first stanza, however, I find the second stanza somewhat awkward.
1. Using adverbs at the end of lines doesn't feel right for me.
2. Not sure about angelic maybe celestial majesty.
3. Last line overly long and forced using immortality and infinity to rhyme with above lines. However, only my opinion, you are the author.

 Comment Written 15-Aug-2019

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reply by the author on 15-Aug-2019

Dear Harry, Thank you. I will go in and edit. Thanks for your comments and suggestions. Dove

reply by HarryT on 15-Aug-2019

You are welcome. Keep writing.

Comment from Sugarray77

Excellent

Thank you for sharing this faith-filled verse with us. I am always blessed by your testimony of faith as you share it with us through your poetry. Well done and thanks.

Melissa

 Comment Written 15-Aug-2019

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reply by the author on 15-Aug-2019

Dear Melissa, Thank you for your comments, compliments and review. Dove

Comment from Debbie Pope

Excellent

This is lovely, Dovemarie. My son just married a Catholic girl, and I find myself so unfamiliar with her religion. Even the wedding was so different from what I was used to. Thank you for educating me on the Feast of the Assumption. Your poem is descriptive and moving.

 Comment Written 15-Aug-2019

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reply by the author on 15-Aug-2019

Dear Debbie, Thank you for your comments and review. I'm glad I could give you a little info into the Catholic religion. Dove