Alone with Thoughts
When one ponders life.3 total reviews
Comment from Bill Schott
This 5-7-5, Alone With Thoughts, has the right set up and brings us to the reflective moment when we ponder our deeds and goals. What next and why?
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2019
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This 5-7-5, Alone With Thoughts, has the right set up and brings us to the reflective moment when we ponder our deeds and goals. What next and why?
Comment Written 16-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2019
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No matter how old we get, that is the eternal question. Thanks for the read and review.
Comment from RodG
Interesting ambiguities involving this man. Is he really so old that nothing remains to be done, or has life taken such a toll he has lost interest in everything? You make the reader ponder. Rod
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2019
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Interesting ambiguities involving this man. Is he really so old that nothing remains to be done, or has life taken such a toll he has lost interest in everything? You make the reader ponder. Rod
Comment Written 15-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2019
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Thanks much for your encouraging words, and the review.
Comment from the13thpoet
Good Thursaday morning. Thank you for sharing your poem, I think you executed the 5-7-5 form of poem quite well. I am already starting to ponder that same question. Good job and good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2019
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Good Thursaday morning. Thank you for sharing your poem, I think you executed the 5-7-5 form of poem quite well. I am already starting to ponder that same question. Good job and good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 15-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2019
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Yes, every so often these thoughts creep up from the canyons of one's mind. Thanks for the read and review.
