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Colours of Romance

Enchanting sunset...

15 total reviews 
Comment from kahpot
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So peaceful is your artwork that it draws the reader into your words of romance and tranquillity, an excellent 5-7-5 pom beautifully presented, best wishes for your contest****kahpot

 Comment Written 15-Aug-2019

reply by the author on 15-Aug-2019
    Thank you so much! I?m a lover of the water and I?m a lover of color so put the two together and ?Magic? is born! Appreciate you stuff to take time to leave me some feedback on this! xoxo
Comment from V McCrary
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A great 5-7-5 with perfect illustrations. It requires a bit of focus but is not distracting. Thank you for sharing & stay blesse. V

 Comment Written 15-Aug-2019

reply by the author on 15-Aug-2019
    Thank you I appreciate that you stopped to take time to read! :)
Comment from LisaMay
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I am enjoying the organic magic of Yanni's beautiful music and the gorgeous sunset photograph while I write this, in praise of the organic magic you weave with your romantic words that describe the twilight colours of sunset.

 Comment Written 15-Aug-2019

reply by the author on 15-Aug-2019
    Your heartfelt compliment is greatly appreciated! xoxo
Comment from Thomas Bowling
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This is how poetry is supposed to be written. You could teach a writing class. Writing prompt challenges are great. They force you to write on subjects you never thought of.


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 Comment Written 15-Aug-2019

reply by the author on 15-Aug-2019
    That?s why I love this site! I would?ve never ever thought to write the things I?ve been writing if I had not been on this site and been given challenges like this! I am honored by your feedback! xoxo
Comment from Patty Palmer
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Your poem is fine. The picture you chose for your poem is really beautiful! Makes me want to jump into the picture. I could use a vacation.
There is only one thing I would like to suggest is the coloring of the words. The yellow lettering against the blue background made it very difficult to read.
Have a nice evening!
Patty


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 Comment Written 15-Aug-2019

reply by the author on 15-Aug-2019
    Ok thank you, Maybe I can switch the colors around with yellow and blue letters! I appreciate your suggestion and I?m grateful that you stopped to review it! xoxo
reply by Patty Palmer on 15-Aug-2019
    You're welcome! I've done that a few times and someone mentioned it to me so I thought I would pass it on. Have a good night
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2019
    I changed it to a purpleish color on the blue and it is much easier to read now. xoxo
reply by Patty Palmer on 15-Aug-2019
    Yes it is! I just looked and you're right it does look better!
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2019
    Awesome! Again thanks so much for the advice! xoxo