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Tweet and Twitter

A trimeric on the birds I see and hear

13 total reviews 
Comment from Bill Schott
Excellent
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This trimeric poem, Tweet and Twitter, has the proper formatting and gathers the observed movements of the local birds to see an active and healthy system making life happen all around. Nice.

 Comment Written 16-Aug-2019


reply by the author on 17-Aug-2019
    Hi Bill Thanks so much I am always pleased to have your reviews and glad you like this one Cheers
Comment from Richard J
Exceptional
This work has reached the exceptional level

Your poem is not only beautifully presented, it is masterfully composed with smooth as silk syntax, spot-on rhymes, imagery and metaphor even the most accomplished will surely adore.
Such a lovely storyline, too, expressing the author's highly creative level in capturing and holding the reader from beginning to end.

Kudos on an obviously winning entry.
Thank you ever-so gratefully for sharing your excellent skills! ~ Richard : )

 Comment Written 15-Aug-2019


reply by the author on 16-Aug-2019
    Thank you ever so much Richard a lovely surprise to receive such a glowing review and even I do not win this wins for me I loved sitting and watching the birds and listening to their tweeting the other morning and therefore they were my inspiration for this entry and so glad you found it a worthy entry For this contest With many Cheers to you
reply by Richard J on 16-Aug-2019
    I loved reading You~*
Comment from Gail Denham
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Good job on this form. I like it - we've been having more birds come round - I gave in and put feed out - even tho it's summer - cuz I like the "chitter" of the birds - some sounds I hadn't heard before.
Nice poem.

 Comment Written 14-Aug-2019


reply by the author on 16-Aug-2019
    Hi Gail Thank you and the birds were plentiful and chirpy the other morning so the helped my inspiration for this style ( new to me) Cheers Christine
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
Excellent
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Poet enjoys and speaks how she learns by birds, by sitting, watching and listening to the birds and their melodious tweets and twittering going from one branch to branch or tree to tree; well said, well done. Liked and enjoyed the read. Write to Inspire, Change.

 Comment Written 14-Aug-2019


reply by the author on 16-Aug-2019
    Hi Alcreator Thanks for your review and I enjoyed the challenge in this one and the birds helped my muse Cheers
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
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A very well-written trimeric treat poem about the real birds that constantly tweet and twitter in the morning around my garden. Sometimes it is friendly and awesome tweets other times it warns in fear.

 Comment Written 14-Aug-2019


reply by the author on 14-Aug-2019
    Hi Sandra Thank you for reading and yes the birds are gorgeous to watch Cheers
Comment from Diana L Crawford
Excellent
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This is beautiful! What a challenge to mold these lovely words into this poetic structure! Perfect imagery of the activity of birds! You did this contest proud with this entry! xoxo

 Comment Written 13-Aug-2019


reply by the author on 14-Aug-2019
    Hi Diane Many thanks for your review. I enjoyed the challenge and the birds gave me the content Cheers
reply by Diana L Crawford on 14-Aug-2019
    :) xoxo very welcome!
Comment from Sallyo
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Charming! The sparrows fit the poem beautifully even if they're not the photo you intended. I don't know this form well, but as far as I can see it works delightfully as a poem.

 Comment Written 13-Aug-2019


reply by the author on 14-Aug-2019
    Hi Sally Thanks for your review and I have never written this style either so fun to have a go Cheers
Comment from Spangle
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This is a charming posting using the trimeric form to share a tale about the birds twittering and flittering all about. They appear to be having a good time, such as I had reading your poem. :-) Best wishes!

 Comment Written 13-Aug-2019


reply by the author on 14-Aug-2019
    Hi Spangle Many thanks for your review I enjoyed the challenge Cheers
reply by Spangle on 14-Aug-2019
    :-)
Comment from Mia Twysted
Good
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It rolls off the tongue very nicely. I love the rhyme you did very well with making it connect throughout the whole piece.

The only thing I felt was wrong with the piece was although I could see the birds flying about I didn't feel connected to them or the nature they were in.

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 Comment Written 13-Aug-2019


reply by the author on 14-Aug-2019
    Hi Mia Thanks for your review it is sometimes hard to feel the poem but I am pleased to have your comments
Comment from Y. M. Roger
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Wow -- your poem gives the reader a true feel of the birds and the wonderful sounds of so many of them in the trees... great interpretation of this style... :) Thanx for sharing and best of luck at the polls! :)

 Comment Written 13-Aug-2019


reply by the author on 14-Aug-2019
    Hi Yvette Thank you for reviewing this post I enjoyed writing this new style to me Fun and the birds were a bonus