Precious Steppingstones
Poem with a message. (free verse)21 total reviews
Comment from misscookie
Lord have mercy on my soul. I have walked on those stepping stone in my life
. When I read your poem it gave me a flash back of some things I could remember some were bad some were good. Praise His Holy name.He Was there every time I stumble
thank you for sharing
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reply by the author on 13-Aug-2019
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Lord have mercy on my soul. I have walked on those stepping stone in my life
. When I read your poem it gave me a flash back of some things I could remember some were bad some were good. Praise His Holy name.He Was there every time I stumble
thank you for sharing
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Comment Written 12-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2019
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Thanks for your review.
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You are very welcome
take care
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Comment from kiwigirl2821
Hi Patricia. I read somewhere that we shouldn't be so absorbed with what we look like on the outside and concentrate on the beauty of our insides. Be the best we can be internally ... what a thought! Your write made me think of this ... good stuff my friend. xoxo deborah
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2019
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Hi Patricia. I read somewhere that we shouldn't be so absorbed with what we look like on the outside and concentrate on the beauty of our insides. Be the best we can be internally ... what a thought! Your write made me think of this ... good stuff my friend. xoxo deborah
Comment Written 12-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2019
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Thanks for your review.
Comment from lyenochka
Great message, Patricia. Yes, those hard times that we face in life can become learning stepping stones that we can look back on and see how the Lord was caring for us during those times.
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2019
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Great message, Patricia. Yes, those hard times that we face in life can become learning stepping stones that we can look back on and see how the Lord was caring for us during those times.
Comment Written 12-Aug-2019
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Thanks for your review.
Comment from Teri7
Patricia, This is a very well written free verse poem you have penned with a very good lesson in it. You used great descriptive words and very nice imagery. I enjoyed reading and reviewing this. love and blessings, Teri
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Patricia, This is a very well written free verse poem you have penned with a very good lesson in it. You used great descriptive words and very nice imagery. I enjoyed reading and reviewing this. love and blessings, Teri
Comment Written 12-Aug-2019
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Thanks for your review.
Comment from brenda faye curtis
There's a great deal of wisdom packed into this short poem, and I hope a number of people read this and take it to heart. I know I've learned from every mistake I've made, and I'm glad my parents did not get in the way; they allowed me to make mistakes. If not for the mistakes, I'd have learned so little.
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There's a great deal of wisdom packed into this short poem, and I hope a number of people read this and take it to heart. I know I've learned from every mistake I've made, and I'm glad my parents did not get in the way; they allowed me to make mistakes. If not for the mistakes, I'd have learned so little.
Comment Written 12-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2019
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Thanks for your review. Thanks for the stars.
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You're most welcome, Patricia.
Comment from Janetsue
This is a beautiful posting with comforting words like a prayer of healing and compassion gliding over this world of troubled souls, and on up into the caring hands of God. Love it, my friend!
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2019
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This is a beautiful posting with comforting words like a prayer of healing and compassion gliding over this world of troubled souls, and on up into the caring hands of God. Love it, my friend!
Comment Written 12-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2019
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Thanks for your review. Thanks for the stars.
Comment from Henry King
What an outstanding use of our errors as we stroll through our life. I especially like your use of our mistakes as stepping stones. The words are melodic as they are spoken aloud. The use of sibilance makes them sound more poetic. Well done.
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2019
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What an outstanding use of our errors as we stroll through our life. I especially like your use of our mistakes as stepping stones. The words are melodic as they are spoken aloud. The use of sibilance makes them sound more poetic. Well done.
Comment Written 12-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2019
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Thanks for your review. Thanks for the stars.
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You are very welcome.
Comment from Y. M. Roger
Well, Patricia, this is certainly the wisest of offerings for the day -- just beautifully stated and just the exact thing the younger generation needs to hear!! ;) :) Thanx so very much for sharing! ;) ;) Yvette
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Well, Patricia, this is certainly the wisest of offerings for the day -- just beautifully stated and just the exact thing the younger generation needs to hear!! ;) :) Thanx so very much for sharing! ;) ;) Yvette
Comment Written 12-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2019
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Thanks for your review.
Comment from Bill Pinder
That is a very critical point included in this writing. Thanks for sharing it in a creative way. When we become critical of ourselves, it also carries over to others. When we can receive more grace for ourselves, We will also have more grace for others.
Bill
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2019
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That is a very critical point included in this writing. Thanks for sharing it in a creative way. When we become critical of ourselves, it also carries over to others. When we can receive more grace for ourselves, We will also have more grace for others.
Bill
Comment Written 12-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2019
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Thanks for your review.
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
This is a great message in a poem, Patricia. I enjoyed reading it. Your picture is a nice pairing with your well-chosen words. Great job with a strong message. Thanks for sharing. Jan
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reply by the author on 13-Aug-2019
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This is a great message in a poem, Patricia. I enjoyed reading it. Your picture is a nice pairing with your well-chosen words. Great job with a strong message. Thanks for sharing. Jan
line 4 steppinstones--->steppingstones
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Comment Written 12-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2019
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Thanks for your review.
