Assassin Nation
Viewing comments for Chapter 11 "In Country flashback"A sequel to the novel Baker's Dozen
8 total reviews
Comment from kahpot
Another great chapter and I like the way you switch the names around now, " Milliliter Conner" I was confused earlier but now I have caught up I understand and appreciate the change up, makes for a bit of humor while reading, it's interesting now to find out how and why the twins have gone separate ways, very well done****kahpot
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2019
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Another great chapter and I like the way you switch the names around now, " Milliliter Conner" I was confused earlier but now I have caught up I understand and appreciate the change up, makes for a bit of humor while reading, it's interesting now to find out how and why the twins have gone separate ways, very well done****kahpot
Comment Written 22-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2019
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Thank you, kahpot, for following the story. Bill
Comment from Earl Corp
I didn't realize Connor was a traItor or a twin. Were there fragging deaths at Firebase Jay, or is that piece of it fiction? Good installment ,caant wait to read the next chapter.
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2019
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I didn't realize Connor was a traItor or a twin. Were there fragging deaths at Firebase Jay, or is that piece of it fiction? Good installment ,caant wait to read the next chapter.
Comment Written 21-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2019
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Deaths were factually caused by rocket and mortar fire.
Comment from Mystic Angel 7777
The story progresses well and is easy to follow. The dialog is authentic and flows naturally adding to the authenticity of the storyline. Well done and thank you very much for sharing it.
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2019
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The story progresses well and is easy to follow. The dialog is authentic and flows naturally adding to the authenticity of the storyline. Well done and thank you very much for sharing it.
Comment Written 20-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2019
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Thanks, MA, for giving this flash back a look. One more, I think, and then back to the current storyline.
Comment from nomi338
Danger Will Robinson! Danger! there at least two foxes in the hen house and the biggest danger is they both look like chickens. They are definitely not chickens in any way shape, form or fashion. I repeat, danger Will Robinson!
reply by the author on 18-Aug-2019
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Danger Will Robinson! Danger! there at least two foxes in the hen house and the biggest danger is they both look like chickens. They are definitely not chickens in any way shape, form or fashion. I repeat, danger Will Robinson!
Comment Written 18-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 18-Aug-2019
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Who knew these guys have been into so much?
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Very clever my friend. You just might have a dangerous mindset. I think maybe the Govt. might need to put you on a watch list. LOL.
Comment from Liz O'Neill
The suspense jumps up a notch with the mention of " friendly fire casualties". I could hear a cautionary tale minor chord sounded. What terrible actions they had to take. One of my classmates died there, just out of high school. He wrote a letter to our hometown Priest who read it from the pulpit. It certainly seemed that he knew he wasn't coming home. He was killed about a week after the letter was dated. You will draw the history buffs in and those who lived through it and we who wrote letters to them. I'm glad I wrote once to Jody. May he and all of them rest in peace. I hope they are on a fresh new adventure. Thank you.
reply by the author on 18-Aug-2019
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The suspense jumps up a notch with the mention of " friendly fire casualties". I could hear a cautionary tale minor chord sounded. What terrible actions they had to take. One of my classmates died there, just out of high school. He wrote a letter to our hometown Priest who read it from the pulpit. It certainly seemed that he knew he wasn't coming home. He was killed about a week after the letter was dated. You will draw the history buffs in and those who lived through it and we who wrote letters to them. I'm glad I wrote once to Jody. May he and all of them rest in peace. I hope they are on a fresh new adventure. Thank you.
Comment Written 18-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 18-Aug-2019
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I know we lost a big piece of that generation of men and women. Dark time for everyone. It?s good you wrote to Jody.
Comment from Iza Deleanu
Intriguing story. Lots of shooting and killings. A little bit of a Rambo style, but the chapter maintains the cursive of action. Good luck with your writing, and thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 18-Aug-2019
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Intriguing story. Lots of shooting and killings. A little bit of a Rambo style, but the chapter maintains the cursive of action. Good luck with your writing, and thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 18-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 18-Aug-2019
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Connor is a sociopath trained from birth as an assassin. His life is an attempt to eventually rule the world overnight.
Comment from lyenochka
Scary how these genetically modified twins have such a big influence on the government. I like how you weave in real information with your fiction, like Firebase Jay and Nixon's talks with China.
reply by the author on 18-Aug-2019
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Scary how these genetically modified twins have such a big influence on the government. I like how you weave in real information with your fiction, like Firebase Jay and Nixon's talks with China.
Comment Written 18-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 18-Aug-2019
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Although this is fiction, the implanting of long-range sleepers and micro manipulators is an accepted methodology for changing a nations sense of self to match someone else?s.
Comment from DonandVicki
I have read and written many Vietnam horror stories but nothing comes close to the realities of war and actual combat. Yours did connect with me. Very well written.
reply by the author on 18-Aug-2019
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I have read and written many Vietnam horror stories but nothing comes close to the realities of war and actual combat. Yours did connect with me. Very well written.
Comment Written 18-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 18-Aug-2019
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Thank you, Don, for the upbeat review. Bill
