Fly Away
A vision.47 total reviews
Comment from Lance S. Loria
A happy spiritual tale which is based on a sorrowful experience during life. A conflict of emotions. Very well written. Easy to read and follow. No edits or adjustments needed.
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2019
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A happy spiritual tale which is based on a sorrowful experience during life. A conflict of emotions. Very well written. Easy to read and follow. No edits or adjustments needed.
Comment Written 27-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2019
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Thank you for the excellent review. It is always appreciated.
Sally
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
Death will come and take each of us to that place one day, there's no stopping it. But, when we are called, we're happy to go. This is a lovely flash fiction story, Sally, and the picture is stunning. Well done. Good luck in the contest. :)) Sandra xx
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2019
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Death will come and take each of us to that place one day, there's no stopping it. But, when we are called, we're happy to go. This is a lovely flash fiction story, Sally, and the picture is stunning. Well done. Good luck in the contest. :)) Sandra xx
Comment Written 25-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2019
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Thank you so much for the excellent review and kind compliments, dear Sandra. This is how I hope and envision my last few moments will be, and the reality of heaven.
Sending you my best today as always,
Sally xo
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Likewise! xxx
Comment from ExperiencingLiphe
We'll never know what it's like to be wrapped in the arms of Jesus until it's our time to go. One can only imagine what that will feel like. You did a great job and I'm glad you're still with us today.
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2019
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We'll never know what it's like to be wrapped in the arms of Jesus until it's our time to go. One can only imagine what that will feel like. You did a great job and I'm glad you're still with us today.
Comment Written 25-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2019
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Thank you very much for the excellent review and kind words. I?m glad you?re still enjoying me in my living flesh.
Sending you my best today as always,
Sally xo
Comment from Jeffrey L. Michaux
This is absolutely beautiful Sally. It moved me reading this. When He comes for us, our ministering spirit that was sent forth for us that are heirs of salvation will tell us to come. That will be so wonderful to be with the King and Lord of all when we've finished running our race. I've said it before to many people, I don't really care about a mansion or streets paved with gold, I just want to be at the feet of my Jesus. It brings tears to my eyes thinking about that. Our spirits want to go on and be with our Lord. Paul wanted to go on, but, his fight wasn't over at that time. It was needful that he stay here with them. I enjoyed reading this powerful and inspirational work. Well done!
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2019
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This is absolutely beautiful Sally. It moved me reading this. When He comes for us, our ministering spirit that was sent forth for us that are heirs of salvation will tell us to come. That will be so wonderful to be with the King and Lord of all when we've finished running our race. I've said it before to many people, I don't really care about a mansion or streets paved with gold, I just want to be at the feet of my Jesus. It brings tears to my eyes thinking about that. Our spirits want to go on and be with our Lord. Paul wanted to go on, but, his fight wasn't over at that time. It was needful that he stay here with them. I enjoyed reading this powerful and inspirational work. Well done!
Comment Written 24-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2019
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Thank you so much, dear Jeffrey. I appreciate the heartfelt reviews and shared faith, too. It?s good to know when our bodies die, we truly don?t die, we move into everlasting life.
Sending you my best today as well,
Sally :+)
Comment from poetwatch
Heavenly Sally. :) I pray to see and hear from you no matter where you are. I will search the stars and count my blessings for I know you are not far. This is a very good entry for the Flash Fiction contest. You better be there when I vote. :)
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2019
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Heavenly Sally. :) I pray to see and hear from you no matter where you are. I will search the stars and count my blessings for I know you are not far. This is a very good entry for the Flash Fiction contest. You better be there when I vote. :)
Comment Written 24-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2019
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Thank you for the excellent review and and kind compliments, Jose. I hope is is a reader vote but I think it is a FanStory committee vote that is in session right now! Hoping for the best either way. I gave it my best shot.
Sal ,+))
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written flash fiction about being swept away by an angelike while the rest of the family try to keep you down on earth, the experience of flying away from the sorrows of earth is one we all dream about.
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2019
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A very well-written flash fiction about being swept away by an angelike while the rest of the family try to keep you down on earth, the experience of flying away from the sorrows of earth is one we all dream about.
Comment Written 24-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2019
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Thank you for the excellent review and encouragement, dear Sandra. It?s a wonderful thing to look forward to for the Christian, to be with our Lord and Christ.
Sending you my best today as always,
Sally xo
Comment from Teri7
This is a very beautiful flash fiction you have penned my friend. I love the song you have used and the art work too. I truly believe in visions from the Lord. Very good words too my friend. Thank you for sharing! love and blessings, Teri
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2019
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This is a very beautiful flash fiction you have penned my friend. I love the song you have used and the art work too. I truly believe in visions from the Lord. Very good words too my friend. Thank you for sharing! love and blessings, Teri
Comment Written 24-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2019
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Thank you very much for the excellent review of my contest entry. I am pleased it spoke to you. As Christians, we have the hope of eternal life and heaven with Jesus.
Sending you my best today as always,
Sal xo
Comment from Rikki66
Good luck in the contest. May death be as peaceful as this for us all. Old southern gospel I wrapped safe within the arms of God.**************************
RikkiLXVI
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2019
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Good luck in the contest. May death be as peaceful as this for us all. Old southern gospel I wrapped safe within the arms of God.**************************
RikkiLXVI
Comment Written 24-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2019
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Thank you so much for the excellent review and kind compliments. It is so appreciated.
Some bright morning when this life is over
I'll fly away
To that home on God's celestial shore
I'll fly away................. Sal xo
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Amen
Rikki LXVI
Comment from Gail Denham
And yet you came back. A touching story and it made me think what it felt like to be suspended between earth and heaven. A good look at the feelings one has then.
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2019
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And yet you came back. A touching story and it made me think what it felt like to be suspended between earth and heaven. A good look at the feelings one has then.
Comment Written 24-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2019
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Thank you so much for the excellent review and insightful comments. I?m so pleased you enjoyed it. Yes, I?m still here for round two.
Sending you my best today as always,
Sally xo
Comment from tfawcus
This is a very emotive and realistic description of the last moments of a trauma victim. I particularly liked the way you described the separation of the body from the soul from the spirit: "My physical body now the phantom limb that had been severed from soul and spirit. "
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2019
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This is a very emotive and realistic description of the last moments of a trauma victim. I particularly liked the way you described the separation of the body from the soul from the spirit: "My physical body now the phantom limb that had been severed from soul and spirit. "
Comment Written 24-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2019
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Thank you, Tony, for the excellent review and insightful comments. Many readers commented on that line you mentioned. ?My physical body now the phantom limb that had been severed from soul and spirit.? Pray, will I possibly win the contest? We?ll see. So good to hear from you.
Sending you my best today as always,
Sally :+)
