the flame still burns
3-3-3 in syllables and words16 total reviews
Comment from Mystic Angel 7777
Nicely done minimal syllable effort. It speaks volumes in the nine syllables used. The use of alliteration added to the flavor of the overall tone. Well done and thank you very much for sharing it.
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2019
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Nicely done minimal syllable effort. It speaks volumes in the nine syllables used. The use of alliteration added to the flavor of the overall tone. Well done and thank you very much for sharing it.
Comment Written 03-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2019
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so pleased you liked this brief verse
my wife liked it too (-:
Comment from Y. M. Roger
Well, a very happy birthday to Mark D. R.'s wife! ;) A fun 3-3-3 with loving sentiments.. Thanx for sharing it and your heart with all of us! ;) Yvette
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2019
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Well, a very happy birthday to Mark D. R.'s wife! ;) A fun 3-3-3 with loving sentiments.. Thanx for sharing it and your heart with all of us! ;) Yvette
Comment Written 03-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2019
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yep Yvette, she is a gem
we celebrated again on the weekend at my son's NJ home
Mark
Comment from Susan X Smith
I enjoyed this short and sweet poem and congratulate yourself and your wife on your ongoing union. The abstract artwork was well chosen. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2019
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I enjoyed this short and sweet poem and congratulate yourself and your wife on your ongoing union. The abstract artwork was well chosen. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 03-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2019
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You are very welcome Susan! And thanks for recognizing our union.
Mark
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written poem about the flame that burns for only one person in your lidea and you won't look for any other. It seems she feel the same and returns het fire just for you.
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2019
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A very well-written poem about the flame that burns for only one person in your lidea and you won't look for any other. It seems she feel the same and returns het fire just for you.
Comment Written 31-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2019
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Thanks for your support for my verse about my better half of my marriage.
Comment from duchessofdrumborg
"the flame still burns", is short, succinct and very much to the point. With a minimum of words this talented poet, has told it as it is. I look forward to seeing your next post.
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2019
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"the flame still burns", is short, succinct and very much to the point. With a minimum of words this talented poet, has told it as it is. I look forward to seeing your next post.
Comment Written 31-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2019
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thanks Duchess for enjoying my posting (-:
it is a birthday tribute to my bride, my wife
she celebrated her bday on Thursday
Comment from Joan E.
Thank you for sharing this tribute to your wife. I enjoyed the eyecatching artwork and your abundant use of alliteration in this 3-3-3 form. Many happy returns to you both- Joan
reply by the author on 30-Aug-2019
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Thank you for sharing this tribute to your wife. I enjoyed the eyecatching artwork and your abundant use of alliteration in this 3-3-3 form. Many happy returns to you both- Joan
Comment Written 30-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 30-Aug-2019
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Thanks Joan for recognizing my post. Methinks she will always be my bride! The alliterations are just a bonus for your read (-;
Mark
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Thanks for the bonus and being part of our special club?I?ve only be married to my husband for 48 years! Cheers- Joan
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Congrats on your longevity too! We have two children and four grandchildren. There are no expectation that either will increase LOL. Daughter and her husband have identical twin girls (they are 7); our son and his wife have two boys (2 and the youngest born earlier this year). Coincidentally all born in April!
Comment from Sally Law
Well, it's such a wonderful thing to see a man who is still in love with his wife. How refreshing. My husband still refers to me as his bride after 44 years. It's adorable.
Sending you my best today as always and a Happy Birthday to your wife!
Sally :+)
reply by the author on 30-Aug-2019
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Well, it's such a wonderful thing to see a man who is still in love with his wife. How refreshing. My husband still refers to me as his bride after 44 years. It's adorable.
Sending you my best today as always and a Happy Birthday to your wife!
Sally :+)
Comment Written 30-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 30-Aug-2019
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Sally,
I married in Dec 1973 so I am a little ahead of you (-: She still is my bride!
Mark
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Sweet and sweet, you two !!
Comment from PoemsOfDD
Aww, how sweet of you to write a short piece for your wife on her birthday. That is very touching Mark. Good job and thank you for sharing the love and poetry for your wife. Happy birthday to her :-) ~DD
reply by the author on 30-Aug-2019
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Aww, how sweet of you to write a short piece for your wife on her birthday. That is very touching Mark. Good job and thank you for sharing the love and poetry for your wife. Happy birthday to her :-) ~DD
Comment Written 30-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 30-Aug-2019
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DD
Thanks. She received lots of birthday greetings and some chocolate candy to celebrate. She hiked with 30 people in NY's Adirondacks. We had some beer post-hike to quench thirsts.
Mark
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Sounds like she had a memorable celebration. Good on her and cheers to more thirst quenching beers :-) ~DD
Comment from Sugarray77
Hi Mark, I am sure your wife is loving these verses that you are penning to her. The tribute is lovely. I did chuckle when I saw the .57 cents. You said this post is for her, but you entice others to read it with the promotion. Just an observation, my friend. :)
Melissa
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2019
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Hi Mark, I am sure your wife is loving these verses that you are penning to her. The tribute is lovely. I did chuckle when I saw the .57 cents. You said this post is for her, but you entice others to read it with the promotion. Just an observation, my friend. :)
Melissa
Comment Written 29-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2019
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Melissa,
just a clue: my wife is 'my' Girl from Ipanema. And today is her birthday.
Glad others might get joy from the same.
Mark
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
It is bizarre experience; you live in at her fire, flame of which burns for your bride and still her fire burns; well said, well done. Liked and enjoyed the read.
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2019
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It is bizarre experience; you live in at her fire, flame of which burns for your bride and still her fire burns; well said, well done. Liked and enjoyed the read.
Comment Written 29-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2019
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Thanks for your comments about this very short verse.
