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Snow Fairies

a 5-7-5 ode to winter

3 total reviews 
Comment from mrsmajor
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Hi,

This was a very enjoyable poem, written as an Ode to Winter..
Perfect syllable count, and matching picture...I like the way you gave life to the Snowflakes,

"Snowflakes come dancing to earth"...Good luck in the contest, this is a good entry, thanks for sharing.

Warmly
Victoria..

 Comment Written 14-Aug-2019

reply by the author on 14-Aug-2019
    Thank you ever so much! Truly appreciate the reviewing and comments!
reply by mrsmajor on 14-Aug-2019
    You're very welcome, it was my pleasure...Hugs
reply by mrsmajor on 14-Aug-2019

    You're very welcome, it was a pleasure reading about those real live" Snowflakes"..Hugs
Comment from LeftHandedScribe
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The way you have placed Mr. Snowman feels like he is talking to us and sharing the joys and magic of winter. You give a good lesson in the effects of simplicity and brevity.

 Comment Written 11-Aug-2019

reply by the author on 11-Aug-2019
    Thank you. You review and comments are deeply appreciated!
Comment from Pam (respa)
Excellent
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-I love the artwork,
and the presentation is good.
-The syllable count is good,
and the use of one continuous
thought is effective.
-The imagery and
the comparison of
snowflakes to "graceful fairies"
is very good.
-I like you poem and hope
you do well in the contest.

 Comment Written 11-Aug-2019

reply by the author on 11-Aug-2019
    Thank you ever so much for the review, comments and wishes!
reply by Pam (respa) on 11-Aug-2019
    You are very welcome.