On The Road
Life is a journey2 total reviews
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Does reaching your destination mean death? This is the part of life I hate the most, I am enjoying myself so much that I do not want it to end! You went through life in just a few words here, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2019
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Does reaching your destination mean death? This is the part of life I hate the most, I am enjoying myself so much that I do not want it to end! You went through life in just a few words here, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 11-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2019
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Thanks , Dolly, for your empathetic comments. I too am enjoying life but I just felt the road should have an ending. Sadly , a few friends of ours have recently died, but one reached 99 so on that basis we may have a long road yet to travel.
Comment from LeftHandedScribe
What a lovely piece. It flows and has a sense of movement that is really easy and free. For a first attempt you do some marvelous work. My only suggestion is a stronger piece of art to complement your writing.
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2019
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What a lovely piece. It flows and has a sense of movement that is really easy and free. For a first attempt you do some marvelous work. My only suggestion is a stronger piece of art to complement your writing.
Comment Written 11-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2019
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Your review has given me a boost. Thank you. I agree with your suggestion. I should have persevered to find a stronger piece of art.
