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Not So Sweet

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Comment from Elizabeth Emerald
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Delightful story, my fellow fan! Reminds me of when --recently! --I mistook my tube of coconut hair conditioner for toothpaste. MMMMM (???) Cheers. LIZ

 Comment Written 30-Sep-2020

reply by the author on 30-Sep-2020
    Yuck!
    Thank you for the review, I appreciate it :)
    Best wishes, Debra
Comment from humpwhistle
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Hmmm. I'm quite unaware of what purple trifles a woman might carry in her bag these days. Sweet, yet soapy? Foam inducing?
Please forgive my ignorance. What is it?

Don't mind my ignorance. Best of luck.

Peace, Lee

 Comment Written 11-Aug-2019

reply by the author on 11-Aug-2019
    Hi Lee, thanks for asking!! As far as I know, there isn?t anything resembling what I wrote about! Have you heard of Parma violets? My son had one for the first time the other day and he said it tasted really soapy... his remark just triggered my imagination...!
    Thanks for your feedback :)
    Best wishes, Debra
Comment from Lulube
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What a wonderful, cute story with a karma ending. It serves her right ending. Definitely didn't expect mighty bubbles frothing from here mouth. lol Have your kids read this one? They'd get a kick out of it. good luck in the contest

lulube

 Comment Written 11-Aug-2019

reply by the author on 16-Aug-2019
    Hello Lulube :) Thank you so much for your lovely feedback. Best wishes, Debra :)
reply by Lulube on 19-Aug-2019
    welcome

    lulube
Comment from misscookie
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I love the artwork you choose to go with your poem,it is a perfect match. The artwork tell it all. You captured my attention from the first line to the last which made me laugh the little lady got what she deserved one for going into her mothers purse and the second for not telling the truth. .
Thank you for sharing. Cookie food for thought poem.
Thank you for sharing.
Cookie

 Comment Written 11-Aug-2019

reply by the author on 20-Aug-2019
    Thanks for your great feedback, Cookie :)
    Best wishes as always, Debra x
reply by misscookie on 20-Aug-2019
    Your very welcome.
    Peace God be with you and yours.
    Cookie
Comment from Amenian Aypotheeno
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Time to start frothing at the mouth!!!! I have the saying of wash your mouth out with soap but that is usually because of something else! Novel idea of using a washing capsule stuck between someone's teeth, so that they get their just desserts :) Nice and short write and story that comes together well and bursts the bubble of a thief caught red mouthed!

 Comment Written 11-Aug-2019

reply by the author on 20-Aug-2019
    LOL! Thanks Dale :)
    I appreciate your fun feedback as always.
    Best wishes, Debra :)
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
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Well, that should certainly teach her. I enjoyed your contest entry, Debra. The dialogue is great. Your lines flow well and the ending serves her right. Thanks for sharing. Best wishes. Jan

 Comment Written 11-Aug-2019

reply by the author on 20-Aug-2019
    Thank you so much, Jan :)
    I appreciate your feedback as always.
    Best wishes, Debra
Comment from Nike23
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I like your short story. I agree with you Lucy deserves to be left in the soapy mess. You used your words meticulously they were descriptive and vivid. As a reader, I was able to imagine the entire story. Great story and good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 10-Aug-2019

reply by the author on 20-Aug-2019
    Thank you so much for your lovely feedback and good luck wishes. I appreciate both.
    Best wishes, Debra :)
Comment from Teri7
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Debra, This is a very cute and very well written 100 Word Flash Fiction contest entry about naughty little Lucy. You used great descriptive words, very good dialogue and very good imagery from your words. Best wishes in the contest. I enjoyed reading and reviewing this. love and blessings,Teri

 Comment Written 10-Aug-2019

reply by the author on 20-Aug-2019
    Thank you so much for your feedback, Teri. Much appreciated!
    Best wishes as always, Debra :)
Comment from BeasPeas
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She must have eaten one of those soap packets they say to keep away from kids. Ick! A well written 100 word flash. Best of luck in the contest. Marilyn

 Comment Written 10-Aug-2019

reply by the author on 20-Aug-2019
    Thank you so much, Marilyn.
    Best wishes, Debra :) x
Comment from Heather Knight
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I love your little story.
I wouldn't like to be in Lucy's shoes. The taste must be terrible!
You've chosen the perfect picture for this post.
Thanks for sharing and good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 10-Aug-2019

reply by the author on 20-Aug-2019
    Thanks, Maria :) xxx