Those were the days
Schoolday memories ... good and bad9 total reviews
Comment from Bill Schott
This limerick suite, Those Were the Days, has the general format correct displayed in three stanzas and takes us on a globetrotting pursuit of higher learning. Muy bueno!
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2019
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This limerick suite, Those Were the Days, has the general format correct displayed in three stanzas and takes us on a globetrotting pursuit of higher learning. Muy bueno!
Comment Written 12-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2019
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Muchas Gracias .
Comment from Bill Pinder
I enjoyed reading this limerick. Great job of writing one about school days. Was that a true story or did you just make something up about learning a new language? Thanks for sharing!
Bill
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2019
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I enjoyed reading this limerick. Great job of writing one about school days. Was that a true story or did you just make something up about learning a new language? Thanks for sharing!
Bill
Comment Written 12-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2019
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Made it up. Thanks for the review.
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written poem Limerick trio about fun things in school we will always remember and cherish and sometimes making others laugh about the dumb things we did as kiss.
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2019
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A very well-written poem Limerick trio about fun things in school we will always remember and cherish and sometimes making others laugh about the dumb things we did as kiss.
Comment Written 11-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2019
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Thanks Sandra
Comment from Gail Denham
Nice job - I enjoyed the poems. They read well. At least you tried to learn Spanish - I guess Spain's language differs quite a bit from our Latin American languages.
Good luck with the contest.
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2019
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Nice job - I enjoyed the poems. They read well. At least you tried to learn Spanish - I guess Spain's language differs quite a bit from our Latin American languages.
Good luck with the contest.
Comment Written 11-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2019
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Many thanks
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Many thanks
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
Very cute poem. Love the flowage of your words. I think Snickers is a favorite candy bar, too. But who does not like to munch on any candy bar? Your picture expresses boys and girls boarding the school bus; school will resume within a couple weeks here. Where did the summer go to?
reply by the author on 10-Aug-2019
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Very cute poem. Love the flowage of your words. I think Snickers is a favorite candy bar, too. But who does not like to munch on any candy bar? Your picture expresses boys and girls boarding the school bus; school will resume within a couple weeks here. Where did the summer go to?
Comment Written 10-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 10-Aug-2019
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Many thanks Rosemary
Comment from RodG
I thoroughly enjoyed your limerick suite, but the first one made me howl out loud. That is a superb limerick that beautifully characterizes this teacher, using very well-chosen rhymes. Rod
reply by the author on 10-Aug-2019
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I thoroughly enjoyed your limerick suite, but the first one made me howl out loud. That is a superb limerick that beautifully characterizes this teacher, using very well-chosen rhymes. Rod
Comment Written 10-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 10-Aug-2019
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Thanks a bunch rod for your great review
Comment from Y. M. Roger
Oh, yes!! Don't we all have such 'fond' memories -- LOL! :) This is a great offering for the contest -- I must say that moving from the UK to Spain had to really be quite the 'shock' for a teen! ;) :) Thanx for the laughs and the memories and best of luck at the polls! ;)
reply by the author on 10-Aug-2019
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Oh, yes!! Don't we all have such 'fond' memories -- LOL! :) This is a great offering for the contest -- I must say that moving from the UK to Spain had to really be quite the 'shock' for a teen! ;) :) Thanx for the laughs and the memories and best of luck at the polls! ;)
Comment Written 10-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 10-Aug-2019
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Thanks Yvette.
Comment from Sandra Ludwick
Thank you for sharing your poem. I did find it humorous. I applaud you for writing in this style. It is not always easy. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 10-Aug-2019
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Thank you for sharing your poem. I did find it humorous. I applaud you for writing in this style. It is not always easy. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 10-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 10-Aug-2019
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Thanks Sandra
Comment from LeftHandedScribe
A sign of a good limerick is that nice hearty laugh at the end, which you gave me! The description of each character is specific and also stays true to the meter of this type of poem. The language is rich. You challenge yourself with lush words and complex phrasing.
reply by the author on 10-Aug-2019
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A sign of a good limerick is that nice hearty laugh at the end, which you gave me! The description of each character is specific and also stays true to the meter of this type of poem. The language is rich. You challenge yourself with lush words and complex phrasing.
Comment Written 10-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 10-Aug-2019
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Many thanks.
