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Holiday and Holyday Poetry

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religious and holiday poetry

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Comment from Sugarray77
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I think you have constructed a beautiful and meaningful double Etheree form of poetry, Dovemarie. Thank you for sharing this faith-filled verse.

Melissa

 Comment Written 11-Aug-2019


reply by the author on 12-Aug-2019
    Dear Melissa Thank you for your comments and review. Donna
Comment from Gail Denham
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You've spoken - in poem - the creed of the Catholic faith - I like the part where if one sees the son, they see the father. This is what Jesus said of himself several times. it's good to know.
Well done.

 Comment Written 10-Aug-2019


reply by the author on 12-Aug-2019
    Dear Gail, Thank you for your comments, review and compliment. Dove
Comment from moongirlwriter
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I've never thought about Christ looking like his mother. . .but it does make sense to me. Well written poem with a profound message for every Christian. Best of luck to you in the contest.

 Comment Written 10-Aug-2019


reply by the author on 12-Aug-2019
    Dear moongirlwriter, Thank you for your comments and review, and good luck wishes. Dove
reply by moongirlwriter on 18-Aug-2019
    :)
Comment from Mystic Angel 7777
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This is a lovely tribute to Mary. I am sure she sent you a special blessing and some extra grace for this one. Well done and thank you very much for sharing it.

 Comment Written 10-Aug-2019


reply by the author on 12-Aug-2019
    Dear MysticAngel 7777, Thank you for your comments compliments and review. Dove
Comment from Nike23
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Beautiful poem that displays your religion. I like the format of the poem. Your word choice is descriptive. The picture enhances the poem nicely. Good job.

 Comment Written 10-Aug-2019


reply by the author on 12-Aug-2019
    DEar Nike23, Thank you for your compliments, comments and review. Dove
Comment from Y. M. Roger
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A beautiful offering, Donna, that truly brings forth some of the foundations of your faith on the upcoming feast of the Assumption.... thank you for sharing! ;) Yvette

 Comment Written 09-Aug-2019


reply by the author on 10-Aug-2019
    Dear Yvette, Thank you for your comments and review. Donna
Comment from Susan Larson
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What a profound thought! I clicked on to your post expecting a reflection from a child about hothead or She inherited personal or spiritual traits. What a witness to who we are and WHO we reflect.

 Comment Written 09-Aug-2019


reply by the author on 10-Aug-2019
    Dear Susan, Thank you for your comments and review. Dove
reply by Susan Larson on 10-Aug-2019
    I meant "he or she." DOn't know where that "hothead came from. Spell check can really do a number sometimes!